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The One
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‘No not at all…just wondering’
‘Good…get ready!’
After Bette took a quick shower and got dressed they headed to the planet where they found the whole gang sitting at their usual table.
‘Hey guys! What took you so long?’ Dana asked when she first saw them.
Alice shot her head around with a huge grin on her face. Bette knew that grin and was immediately annoyed. Tina saw it and was prepared. They sat down and Alice started her attack…
‘Hey Porter…got laid last night, huh?’
‘Al…shut up!’ said Shane, Dana, Kit and Bette in unison. Tina knew how to tease her back.
‘Hey Piesecki…when was the last time you got laid? Very long time ago or why do you need second hand information?’
Everyone laughed except for Alice. She pouted and gave Tina the evil eye. Bette gave Tina a kiss on the cheek and whispered a ‘thank you’ in her ear. The warmth of Bettes breath on her skin send a shiver down her spine. Although they made love all night she still felt the need of Bette to touch her.
‘Oh come on…after that dance last night I thought I need a cigarette just by watching you. And now you are starting all over again.’ Alice stated but Bette didn’t know what she meant.
‘What are you talking about? We don’t do anything? You are paranoid.’
‘Bette look at your wife and tell me, that she is not horny! Maybe you get old and didn’t satisfy her last night.’
Alice knew exactly how to hit Bette’s soft point. To question her ability as a lover was one of the worst things. Shane gave her a stern look. Tina was fast enough to answer before Bette started to kick Alice’s ass.
‘It’s non of your business Al, but for your information, I’m more than satisfied and because of that I can’t get enough of my woman. Could you stop being a bitch just because you are jealous?’
‘I’m not jealous, just annoyed because you rub it in our faces’
‘Are you PMSing or what? We are always like that and you never freaked out. What’s wrong?’ Now Tina was pissed. Even for Alice she was acting weird.
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Well done, do continue please
Great start, very impressive:) please continue.
Good job Jay Wild, I enjoyed your beginning and look forward to more. Thank you, Md
i like it… and i have always said alice and dana should be together… go for it…PPS
yeah continue…it’d be so nice to see Al and Dana ‘happy in-love’ but don’t let Dana or Al die because I will hunt U down!!!! Lol.
Great Start. Please do continue. For someone using English as a second language youo have impressed me immensely because English is the most difficult foreign language to learn. Post when you can.
Poor Alice, will she ever learn? Excellent start made doubly amazing by the fact that english is not your first language. Please continue.
super start please don’t stop here…
You are doing great this story is good. I like the way it starts off with the original gang but without all of the tibette drama. I love Danish almost as much as Tibette. Thanks for posting looking forward to the next.
Welcome and great Start – It’s good to see someone from germany. I’m also german and I’m a Tibetter. Look forward to read more. PPS
It’s a very good start – do continue.
good job!
Good start, Gabby always hurt Alice. Maybe Dana should step in and help Alice.
Good start. Sometimes we don’t see the one right in front of our eyes. As long as you continue w/a healthy dose of TiBette, I’m aboard.
Dana is so correct in that Alice is blind to Dana and her feelings towards her. Bette and Tina are so cute, you can’t help but love them.
Great start! I am always impressed when someone can write so well in a language other than their own. Welcome to fan fic, and I look forward to your next chapter! Thanks!!