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The One
‘But Shane…it’s been almost a year. I really thought she has changed.’
‘I think you hoped she has changed but in your heart you know that people like Gabby never change. She’s cruel and selfish and she knows that you fall for her everytime!’
‘I know you are right but I feel lonely and I don’t think that I will find the one.’
‘You know Al…sometimes all you need is right in front of you. All you have to do is open your eyes!’ Shane meant Dana because she had this feeling that these two would match.
‘Maybe you’re right….’
‘Yeah maybe….so…will you come out of here and back to our table?’
‘Yeah…give me just a few minutes…I guess I look like shit’
‘Ok…don’t let us wait too long or I sent Jenny in.’
‘You are kidding me’
‘No, I mean it’
‘Ok I hurry!’
Shane left the bathroom and went back to the table. The girls stop talking the moment Shane arrived and Jenny asked
‘So Shane…tell us…what is going on? Tell us everything!’
‘Jen, don’t get me wrong but I think Alice should tell you guys!’
A few moments later Alice came back, went over to Tina and said with a hug
‘I’m sorry that I acted like a total moron but my day started not so good.’
‘It’s ok Alice but please tell us what is the reason for your behaviour?’
Alice sat back in her chair and looked at her hands. She knew that her friends were looking at her and she felt uncomfortable so she tried to make it as quick as possible.
‘I ran into Gabby last night – we went to my place and had an amazing night – I thought this time it would last but when I woke up she was gone and all she left was a note that she had a nice time and we will see each other sometime.’
‘Are you surprised Alice? I mean she always treated you like shit. You can’t expect someone like Gabby to change.’
‘Bette is right. You have to stop let her treat you this way. Alice you deserve better.’
Tina and Bette told her so many times that Gabby is not the one for her and they felt sorry for her. Alice is one of their best friends. An important part of their family. She deserved to find the happiness they shared as a couple.
The whole time everyone tried to help Alice, Dana was silent. Shane recognized it but thought it would be better to talk to her in private after breakfast.
When everyone was done with their breakfast they parted. Shane asked Dana if she could give her a ride which was no problem. After they drove in silence for a few minutes Shane looked at her
‘What? Why are you looking at me like this?’
‘Do you want to talk about it?’
‘Talk about what?’
‘About the fact that you were so silent when we tried to help Alice. And that you didn’t go to the bathroom. I mean tell me if I’m wrong but I thought she is your best friend.’
‘You are right. She is my best friend but I’m tired of listening to her whining about Gabby. We all know that Gabby is a bitch but Alice is too blind to see it. I mean anyway…what is so great about Gabby? She is not even pretty!’
‘You gave it a lot of thought for the fact that you are tired of it.’
‘Shane…it’s just….she is…to blind to see that…that I….’
TBC?
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(41 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
Well done, do continue please
Great start, very impressive:) please continue.
Good job Jay Wild, I enjoyed your beginning and look forward to more. Thank you, Md
i like it… and i have always said alice and dana should be together… go for it…PPS
yeah continue…it’d be so nice to see Al and Dana ‘happy in-love’ but don’t let Dana or Al die because I will hunt U down!!!! Lol.
Great Start. Please do continue. For someone using English as a second language youo have impressed me immensely because English is the most difficult foreign language to learn. Post when you can.
Poor Alice, will she ever learn? Excellent start made doubly amazing by the fact that english is not your first language. Please continue.
super start please don’t stop here…
You are doing great this story is good. I like the way it starts off with the original gang but without all of the tibette drama. I love Danish almost as much as Tibette. Thanks for posting looking forward to the next.
Welcome and great Start – It’s good to see someone from germany. I’m also german and I’m a Tibetter. Look forward to read more. PPS
It’s a very good start – do continue.
good job!
Good start, Gabby always hurt Alice. Maybe Dana should step in and help Alice.
Good start. Sometimes we don’t see the one right in front of our eyes. As long as you continue w/a healthy dose of TiBette, I’m aboard.
Dana is so correct in that Alice is blind to Dana and her feelings towards her. Bette and Tina are so cute, you can’t help but love them.
Great start! I am always impressed when someone can write so well in a language other than their own. Welcome to fan fic, and I look forward to your next chapter! Thanks!!