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The One
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‘Fuck you Tina!’ Alice stood up and walked to the bathroom.
Everyone seemed confused except Shane. Like everytime Yoda knew what was going
on with Alice.
‘Ok, what is going on? Shane you are the only one who is not looking confused. Do you know something?’ Tina saw it in Shane’s face that she knew what caused that scene.
‘The better question would be…what happened last night!’
‘So…’ Bette’s patience was gone because she didn’t like the way Alice spoke with Tina and was also confused because Alice never acted like that.
‘Gabby came in after you guys left and Alice took her home. So after what we all saw a few moments ago, I would assume that it not went the way Alice hoped.’
‘Not again…I’m sorry but it is not our fault that Alice is too blind to see that Gabby is a cold heartless bitch. She can’t treat us like shit because Gabby treated her like shit. Ok who’s turn is it?’ Bette looked at Dana.
‘Oh no…don’t look at me! I talked to her last time and you all gave me a hard time afterwards. I think it’s your turn!’ Dana looked at Jenny.
‘If you think so…maybe I can use this for my next book!’ Jenny announced proud and rose from her chair. In that moment Shane jumped to her feet
‘You know Jen…I think it’s my turn today.’ With that Shane went to the bathroom and found Alice crying.
‘Hey Al…’
‘Shane please leave me alone’
‘You know…we are all worried and I have this feeling that you are acting so weird because you went home with Gabby last night.’
‘I can’t come out. They will judge me because I’m so stupid to fall for Gabby again and again.’
‘Alice no one will judge you. All we want is the best for you…and Gabby is by far not the best for you.’
‘I thought after all this time that she has changed.’
‘What happend?’
‘We had an amazing night but when I woke up this morning she was gone. All she left was a note on the table that it was nice and we’ll see sometime.’
‘Well that’s what she did to you everytime and I’m not surprised that she did it again.’
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Well done, do continue please
Great start, very impressive:) please continue.
Good job Jay Wild, I enjoyed your beginning and look forward to more. Thank you, Md
i like it… and i have always said alice and dana should be together… go for it…PPS
yeah continue…it’d be so nice to see Al and Dana ‘happy in-love’ but don’t let Dana or Al die because I will hunt U down!!!! Lol.
Great Start. Please do continue. For someone using English as a second language youo have impressed me immensely because English is the most difficult foreign language to learn. Post when you can.
Poor Alice, will she ever learn? Excellent start made doubly amazing by the fact that english is not your first language. Please continue.
super start please don’t stop here…
You are doing great this story is good. I like the way it starts off with the original gang but without all of the tibette drama. I love Danish almost as much as Tibette. Thanks for posting looking forward to the next.
Welcome and great Start – It’s good to see someone from germany. I’m also german and I’m a Tibetter. Look forward to read more. PPS
It’s a very good start – do continue.
good job!
Good start, Gabby always hurt Alice. Maybe Dana should step in and help Alice.
Good start. Sometimes we don’t see the one right in front of our eyes. As long as you continue w/a healthy dose of TiBette, I’m aboard.
Dana is so correct in that Alice is blind to Dana and her feelings towards her. Bette and Tina are so cute, you can’t help but love them.
Great start! I am always impressed when someone can write so well in a language other than their own. Welcome to fan fic, and I look forward to your next chapter! Thanks!!