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The Promise
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please download “MORE THAN WORDS” It was a challenge that came froma reader. I know you’re rolling your eyes at it because its on every I love the eighities type show…I did however find a version by a group called WESTLIFE. THey are a boy band, but they sang it accoustic and its great…I think I like it better. So if you’re into expanding your horizans read the story to that version. other wise just use the version by EXTREME….oksay I am done now…start the song now and read :)”
Chapter 22.25
Tina sat at her desk in her office. She looked down at the picture on her desk. She was holding a single rose to her mouth and Bette had her arms around her waist and playfully swung her off balance. They were both laughing and their hair whipped in their faces. She thought back to earlier times when things were that simple.
I remember when a single rose made everything perfect
Now a dozen roses couldnt fix the gap that grew between them. At times she felt like the only reason they showed affection was for the gangs benefit. Tina used so much of her time and energy to make them feel comfortable, and it was slowly exhausting her. She still told Bette she loved her everyday, and she felt it. But they were just words, a habit that they both grew accustomed to.
She says she loves me everyday but now when I look into her eyes, theyre empty…I dont see my future, I just see my past.
Tina stood up from her desk and walked over to the window. She leaned against the window and wrapped her arms around herself. She closed her eyes and thought back to the night Bette asked her to marry her. Back then Bette didnt know how to say I Love You. Instead she made sure to show it every opportunity she got.
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Bette sat next to Tina on the floor in front of the couch. She pulled a Sterling Rose from behind her back and rubbed it across Tinas lips. Tina smiled and smelled the rose.
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Bette and Shane never. I have a GF that I love dearly I can tell her everything and it stop there. She is just a good frien that is a girl. That is how Bette feel about Shane. Shane needs Bette now
I LOVE THIS ACTUALLY!!!!!…KEEP GOIN…..
Hey gal.. I love westlife.. I found them sometime last year.. also loving this version of your story.. you are such a great writer.. what ever you write.. I am readi’n.. hope you’ve gotten some time for yourself these days… you deserve it! take care and post soon
Well Bette and Shane a good friend and they will not do anything that will hurt Tina, let sse what happen next. Post soon, thank you!
Tina can trust Shane, right? I mean she’s with Al now, so she would never try anything on Bette..Great chaper…keep going!
I like this… yeah… but please don’t let Shane and Bette become more.. Tina can trust Shane! anyway it’s your story , and I love it!
im with wildtouch, keep on going,can’t wait for teh rest of the chapters.
I’m gonna read all the in between chapter. I love it. I think it complet the story. Inner thought that’s how I see them. Keep them they made very good fix for me.
Wow – that last line says a lot…
Am hooked to this story no matter what direction you’ll take…
more please! I love the alice/shane story line. this was a good chapter, keep it going.
I like this story more and more each time you post another chapter. The last line is very telling, Bette needs to hurry with operation sweep Tina off her feet.