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The Promise
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They spent the night making love on the floor…lights on, TV blaring, dinner on the table, only their futures ahead of them. As Tina lie in Bettes exhausted arms while she slept, she leaned back and listened to the beating of Bettes heart. She looked down at her finger and used her thumb to roll the ring around and around. She leaned in farther and let the simpatico rhythm of the heartbeat take her away into slumber….but, before her final moments of consciousness she whispered…
She loves me…
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Tina stood at the window with her arms wrapped around herself. She looked down and noticed she was rhythmically spinning her wedding band around her finger. She thought how funny it was that over seven years ago she didnt see the irony in the ring not fitting just right. Today she felt as thought the band was strangling her. The phone across the room rang, and she came back to reality.
Tina crossed the room and picked up the phone. Alice. It seems like lately she might as well be married to Alice. She was giving her more love and support than her own wife, whom she now knew was running to Shane with every problem.
Hey Al….yeah sure…Id love to…anything not to have to go home to that house….nothing forget I said it….fine, we can talk about it after the show….bye.
Tina sat down at her desk. She thought about the night before at dinner. All Bette could do was talk about Shane. It was starting to drive Tina crazy. Every moment they had alone, Bette seemed to be in another universe. She would stare off into space completely disregarding whatever task she was in the middle of, or she would run off to meet up with Shane every time her cell phone rang. It was like they were girlfriends…..A chill ran down Tinas spine as the dark thought crept to the forefront of her mind. She pushed it back with everything she had.
Never
She knew there was one thing she was willing to gamble her marriage on…and that was the trust she had for the woman she had known for so long….she knew that no matter what, she could trust Shane…
So whatcha think? hope my timing was right with the song…now critique!
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Bette and Shane never. I have a GF that I love dearly I can tell her everything and it stop there. She is just a good frien that is a girl. That is how Bette feel about Shane. Shane needs Bette now
I LOVE THIS ACTUALLY!!!!!…KEEP GOIN…..
Hey gal.. I love westlife.. I found them sometime last year.. also loving this version of your story.. you are such a great writer.. what ever you write.. I am readi’n.. hope you’ve gotten some time for yourself these days… you deserve it! take care and post soon
Well Bette and Shane a good friend and they will not do anything that will hurt Tina, let sse what happen next. Post soon, thank you!
Tina can trust Shane, right? I mean she’s with Al now, so she would never try anything on Bette..Great chaper…keep going!
I like this… yeah… but please don’t let Shane and Bette become more.. Tina can trust Shane! anyway it’s your story , and I love it!
im with wildtouch, keep on going,can’t wait for teh rest of the chapters.
I’m gonna read all the in between chapter. I love it. I think it complet the story. Inner thought that’s how I see them. Keep them they made very good fix for me.
Wow – that last line says a lot…
Am hooked to this story no matter what direction you’ll take…
more please! I love the alice/shane story line. this was a good chapter, keep it going.
I like this story more and more each time you post another chapter. The last line is very telling, Bette needs to hurry with operation sweep Tina off her feet.