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    The Promise

    Story written on February 4, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=51936
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    Chapter 22.25 – More than words

    You didnt have to

    Yes I did

    Bette stared deep into Tinas eyes. She reached over and pulled a single petal off the head of the rose.

    Does she love you?

    Tina looked down coyly. Bette had yet to tell her the three simple words she wanted to hear, and here she was playing games with the subject.

    She loves me not

    Tina reached up and pulled away one of the petals. They continued to go back and forth with the rose slowly diminishing in size.

    Does she love you?

    She loves me not

    Does she love you?

    They continued to hold each others gaze. Bette began to grow nervous as time ran out in their game. Tina wondered if Bette was worried about the outcome of who would pick the last petal.

    Does she love you?

    Tina reached for another petal but Bette held her hand.

    Does she love you?

    Bette placed the rose in Tinas hand and rose to her knees. Tina was confused. How could this confident woman with so much bravado be afraid to say I love you? Tina just sat staring up at Bette. Bette gave a nervous smile and pushed Tinas hand up so that the rose was in front of her eyes. There resting around the last remaining petals was a ring that had been hiding inside the whole time. The ring. The last piece of jewelry Tina would appreciate for the rest of her life. Both women sat staring at the ring.

    Tina looked up at Bette who let a single tear fall from her left eye.

    I love you now and forever…

    Bette pulled the ring off the rose and Tina held her hand out . Bette placed the ring in the palm of her hand and leaned in to kiss Tina. Tina pulled out of the kiss first and wiggle on the floor like a little kid on Christmas. She held out her hand and Bette took the ring and placed it on her finger. Tina grabbed the back of Bettes head and kissed her passionately.

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    Comments

    1. Bette and Shane never. I have a GF that I love dearly I can tell her everything and it stop there. She is just a good frien that is a girl. That is how Bette feel about Shane. Shane needs Bette now

    3. Hey gal.. I love westlife.. I found them sometime last year.. also loving this version of your story.. you are such a great writer.. what ever you write.. I am readi’n.. hope you’ve gotten some time for yourself these days… you deserve it! take care and post soon

    8. I’m gonna read all the in between chapter. I love it. I think it complet the story. Inner thought that’s how I see them. Keep them they made very good fix for me.

    11. I like this story more and more each time you post another chapter. The last line is very telling, Bette needs to hurry with operation sweep Tina off her feet.

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