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The Promise
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Tina: What ever it is, just get it over with Bette..I dont want this to be drawn out..
Bette: I love you.
Tina: What …thats it, nothing else?
Bette: Yes
Tina: You woke me up to tell me you love me?
Tina rolled over and looked at Bette like she was crazy.
Bette: I just…
Bette looked her deep in the eyes.
Tina: What else to you have to tell me?
Bette: I know Ive been really self-involved…well absorbed lately..and Ive been turning to Shane way too much, when I should be coming to you…I just…shes helping me become the person I need to be in order to love you the way you deserve to be loved.
Tina: Okay.
Bette: Uhm…so I just wanted to make sure you know..that you know..I love you and that since Ive been so full of myself lately…Im not slipping back into my old ways…I dont want to be the old Bette…its just taking me a while to become the new one…Im in transition sorta.
Tina gave a weary smile as she pondered what Bette said. New doubts filtered into her mind as to whether she could trust this woman. Bette moved closer and pushed down til she was low enough to place her head on Tinas stomach. She laid stroking the soft hairs on her belly. Bette moved other arm underneath Tina and just stroked her belly waiting for a response from Tina.
Bette: Im trying so hard to be a better woman for you, because you deserve the best….Lately …well, Ive been thinking about how much I love you …and its tearing me apart that you dont love me anymore….or at least not the way you used to.
Tina exhaled deeply and began stroking Bettes long hair that flowed over her upper body. Bette began to tremble with fear when Tina didnt protest her statement. Tina stopped stroking her hair when she felt the searing heat from Bettes tears soak through her tank top.
Bette rolled onto her stomach and began kissing Tinas stomach. Her desperate saliva mixing with her guilty tears as she made a plea for Tinas response. Bettes mind slipped to thoughts of their life that they should have had. She should have been kissing Tinas swollen belly as their kicked a response from inside. Bette squeezed her arms tightly around her waist and sobbed against her core.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos