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The Promise
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FIrt off the song I would like you to DL are two…”Lenny” and “man on the side” both by John Mayer. THen play them when i tell ya to in the story. Lenny is a blues riff he plays and man on the side helps explain what ALice is thinking..she’s gonna sing it to Shane, so get your stuff loaded
Hello, Thanks for the comments, sorry I havent been able to address everyone indv. lately…you know how it is. But anyway, heres the next installment. And to all of you saps out there …ARG! I am not a romantic! ~ mumbles Ill show them romantic and starts the smoke filled hacking on the keyboard~ anywho…Im tired…proof read it your self. Thanks for all the comments, they were great …::cough::except for the romantic ones ::cough:: anyway, goodnight and Ill try to hit you up tomorrow…cause tomorrow will be so much better then today :) Muah aha ha
Chapter 28
My creativity is fueled by the dreams that tempt me.
Dana looked up at herself in the mirror.
Dana: Woah!
She covered her mouth with her hand and looked up at Shane in the mirror. Shane raked her fingers through her hair and teased out the ends.
Shane: Ehh…not bad.
She gave Dana a cocky grin as she spun her around in the chair to face her.
Dana: What do I owe you?
Shane took off her glasses and bit on the stem while pretending to ponder the question.
Shane: Hmmmm…what do I want as payment.
Dana: Oh no! Dont even go there….How much money do I owe you?
Dana tried to wiggle out of her seat, but Shane held the armrests with locked hands. Shane moved her head in slowly towards her.
Shane: I want one…long…
She moved in til she was within inches of Dana.
Shane: Intimate…
Shanes breath grazed Danas lips sending a shiver down her spine.
Shane: Passionate…
Shane moved her mouth until her lips almost grazed Danas
Shane: Hug.
Dana cocked an eyebrow and Shane reciprocated the gesture with a mock expression.
Dana: Y…you…w….uhm
Shane: Yeah…I want a hug… A Dana Fairbanks all out hug…and you have to mean it.
Dana: How bout I write you a check.
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Hey there, yet another fantastic chapter that had me laughing, crying and holding my breath. Now all that’s left is to get Al and Shane on the same page! Can’t wait! :)
I loved the chapter and the music. Great update as always. I can’t wait for the next chapter, again as always I’m an impatient gal! ~laughs softly~
JLo, this story, rocks!! I love the Shane & Alice storyline. Anyway PLEASE post again soon. love your work!!!
That was wonderful so roamntic with Bette & Tina Now lets get Alice and Shane on the right track.. Post soon please
Sorry I forgot to mention, song to download for next chapter is Selah, by Lauryn Hill
Alice is sad, Dana is mad. Marina and jenny are snoozing, Dash and the dog are in bed Shane is waiting for Alice to get over her mad and doesnt know why she is mad. Bette and Tina are making up in the only way that is their way, Guess you know I love this story. Sorry you are feeling ill “cough” ‘Cough” get better . Thanks
Nah… Not romantic at all… Why on earth would anyone ever even say that? ~voice dripping with sarcasm… grins and winks~
I Loved it so much … made me tear at the end. Yay! Good job and more please! ^^
This is great Bette and Tina are back and so beautiful, now Alice and Shane need to talk and let love began. Post soon, thank you!
JLO–I don’t quite remember if I’ve commented on your story before, but I’ve read every chapter with excitement. You have, once again, left me speachless with your talent. I await the next chapter with bated breath.
ace is right …definetely not a romantic…not at all!!! nope…not you..ehhehe…adios y besos