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The Promise
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Tina: What does this have to do with you sleeping with my wife?
Shane: Tina look at me….really look at me…Im-not-*****-Bette!…this is why shes been busy …helping me….Ive been trying to help run the program since Father Joe is sick and Van is finishing his residency with the hospital…and Im also busting at the seams trying to work at Lather….when Father Joe took me from the hospital the it was this or a rot in rehab…Bette convinced him not to put me in a locked facility.
Tina sat back with her mouth hanging open.
Tina: Were things really..
Shane: Yes they were that bad….Van wanted to lock me up and toss the key, but Father Joe was making me go cold turkey and locked me in the basement of the rectory….He forced Bette to come in and see me at my absolute worse…and she still told him No.
Shane looked at Dash, who looked disappointed in her new hero. Dash reached in her pockets and lit a cigarette, pretending like she wasnt surprised or effected by the new information.
Shane: Look, Tina..you have doubts and I dont blame you…Ive fucked up my life and everything in it, but….look I cant tell you what it is, but Bette has been working on something big for you.
Tina: Tomorrow.
Shane, Dash and Ivan nodded.
Shane: All Im asking is that you dont say anything about this to her until tomorrow.
Tina looked appalled and leaned forward in her chair.
Dash: No really! …its big…its a good thing.
Ivan: Tina I dont know whats going on, its not my business, but I do know that Kit is helping her with something.
Tina: What is it?
Shane: Wouldnt you rather see what it is shes doing on your own? Then youll know its not some plot to prove shes not with me…that its whats been going on all the time…trust me when you figure everything out, youll understand that its been planned for awhile, not like I left here and called her and said she knows now do something nice for her…please just wait till tomorrow….after seven years, would twenty-four hours kill you?
Dash: Shes really amped about this…she even had this guy James…
Shane shot her a look and she shut up.
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I love long update’s! Great job!
yay me too loveeeee long updates. your story is absolutly great and I’m always looking forward to read it.
HAHA love the line about “mini me” from Slim Daddy. Very good chapter can’t wait for the next.
That was a great chapter. I really wondering when Shane gonna finaly tell everybody what she’s doing at the church. waiting for the next fix.
As always a great chapter. I cannot wait for the next thrilling installment!!! Keep up the good work.
Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait to find out what’s planned for Sat…. but I’ll wait if I have to! :)
Hurry up.. post again..waiting for saturday…!!!
GREAT UPDATE!!!
PLEASE POST SOOOOOOON!
A great chapter. I love it.
This in one of my favourite stories. As I am sure it has been said before, it is refreshing to have such wonderful characters like Alice and Shane involved. I know it is practically sacriligious to say it, perhaps grounds for banishment even, but there is other stories to tell besides Bette and Tina! Your storytelling makes me laugh out loud. Please continue.
great update. write more soon, I really want to see how Tina will react to what Bette has planned for her.
Wow, I didn’t know Tina could be such a betty! Can’t wait for the actual surprise to happen manana.
Great chapter and I love your story, please post soon. Thank you!