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The Promise
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Tina: James?..who else is involved in this?
Shane and Dash looked at each other and lowered their shoulders. They both looked at the table and Tina abruptly stood up to leave. Their body language had been in sync the entire time and it made everything feel a little too planned.
Shane: EVERYONE!
Tina stopped and turned to see her.
Tina: Everyone?
Dash: No, not Fairbanks…and your…uhm…Alice…
Shane looked at Tina with pleading eyes.
Shane: Tina…they all want you two to be happy and they are so psyched about this so you cant tell them know you found out somethings up…its Jenny, Marina, Lara, Kit, James, and the three of us. ***** even Big Daddy is helping. Im begging you…if our friendship ever meant anything, just play along….sleep at Alices tonight if you cant go back to the house, but dont let anyone know you suspect a thing.
Tina: What?…why?
Shane: Because they all love you and Bette, and wanted to help Bette with what shes doing.
Tina: But it will…I just need you to have faith…not in me and Bette…but in Jenny, and Marina, who wouldnt help us if we were doing something bad to you….have faith that Lara wouldnt keep something like this from Dana unless it was good….
Tina: Ill give you twenty-four hours Shane thats it…and not because of that sad thing about faith, Cause theres no way I would trust Jenny and Marina, when Bette kept their secret for them from Tim….Im going on the idea that Lara wouldnt keep anything from Dana and I know…
Shane sat back in her chair as Jenny came running in looking flustered.
Jenny: Uhm we have a slight problem.
Shane threw both her hands in the air as if to say what else could go wrong Jenny looked terrified at the looks Tina was giving her.
Jenny: Uhmm…you know who…is you know where…and is really…REALLY pissed that …you know who missed their you know what..
Everyone looked at each other.
Dash: Arent you a writer?
Jenny: Yeah I like to write some of the…
Dash: And that was the best you could come up with?
Shane lowered her head to the table and let out an exhausted groan.
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I love long update’s! Great job!
yay me too loveeeee long updates. your story is absolutly great and I’m always looking forward to read it.
HAHA love the line about “mini me” from Slim Daddy. Very good chapter can’t wait for the next.
That was a great chapter. I really wondering when Shane gonna finaly tell everybody what she’s doing at the church. waiting for the next fix.
As always a great chapter. I cannot wait for the next thrilling installment!!! Keep up the good work.
Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait to find out what’s planned for Sat…. but I’ll wait if I have to! :)
Hurry up.. post again..waiting for saturday…!!!
GREAT UPDATE!!!
PLEASE POST SOOOOOOON!
A great chapter. I love it.
This in one of my favourite stories. As I am sure it has been said before, it is refreshing to have such wonderful characters like Alice and Shane involved. I know it is practically sacriligious to say it, perhaps grounds for banishment even, but there is other stories to tell besides Bette and Tina! Your storytelling makes me laugh out loud. Please continue.
great update. write more soon, I really want to see how Tina will react to what Bette has planned for her.
Wow, I didn’t know Tina could be such a betty! Can’t wait for the actual surprise to happen manana.
Great chapter and I love your story, please post soon. Thank you!