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The Promise
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Shane: You have to breathe Tee!
Tina: You…dont get to care about me…not now!
Shane: Do you really think I would do this?…Think about it Tee…
Tina: I knew…I ***** knew!…and I let her fool me again…I let her convince me last night that we could move on …start new…
Shane: Tina did you have the detective follow both of us, or just Bette?…cause if hes followed me this past week, he would have seen me with someone else…
Tina: I didnt hire a detective…these were sent to my office…my ***** office!…with a note from Cheri..it said We were both fools…
Shane: *****!…think about it…I get a phone call today from Steve Jaffe after months, saying hes going to end my life as I know it…because I ruined his marriage and you get these photos?
Tina: So what Shane…youre saying these are from him?…why would he go through the trouble if hes going to kill you?
Shane became desperate. She knew the only way to get through to Tina was to let down her wall of silence and tell her what she needed to know.
Shane: Because…..if…if he had a detective following me, or Bette, after one day…after one day he would know that I dont care if I live or die…..you are my life…all of you are…I didnt realize what he intended until just now…I thought he was going to just kill me.
Tina: You expect me to believe this is all some elaborate conspiracy?
Shane: Tina …expensive surveillance photos …I mean look at these things….they were taken from like Seattle theyre so far away in some of them…that takes expensive equipment, not some tacky camera phone.
Tina continued to pace, trying desperately to collect her thoughts. She was mumbling to herself under her breathe as she tried to piece things together.
Tina: …and right under my ***** nose!
Shane: TINA!
Shane flipped through the photos and held up one at a time as she spoke.
Shane: In the waiting room of the hospital!?! …in Lather!….This one is in Als apartment on her bed…shes standing in the door way yelling at me to put a shirt on but you cant see her!…would I really ***** your wife…my best friend, in our other best friends bed?…..oh and my personal favorites…these are inc a CHURCH!
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I love long update’s! Great job!
yay me too loveeeee long updates. your story is absolutly great and I’m always looking forward to read it.
HAHA love the line about “mini me” from Slim Daddy. Very good chapter can’t wait for the next.
That was a great chapter. I really wondering when Shane gonna finaly tell everybody what she’s doing at the church. waiting for the next fix.
As always a great chapter. I cannot wait for the next thrilling installment!!! Keep up the good work.
Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait to find out what’s planned for Sat…. but I’ll wait if I have to! :)
Hurry up.. post again..waiting for saturday…!!!
GREAT UPDATE!!!
PLEASE POST SOOOOOOON!
A great chapter. I love it.
This in one of my favourite stories. As I am sure it has been said before, it is refreshing to have such wonderful characters like Alice and Shane involved. I know it is practically sacriligious to say it, perhaps grounds for banishment even, but there is other stories to tell besides Bette and Tina! Your storytelling makes me laugh out loud. Please continue.
great update. write more soon, I really want to see how Tina will react to what Bette has planned for her.
Wow, I didn’t know Tina could be such a betty! Can’t wait for the actual surprise to happen manana.
Great chapter and I love your story, please post soon. Thank you!