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The Promise
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Tina looked at Shane as if she had two heads.
Shane: Yeah, you heard me…these are the front steps of St. Judes Cathedral….and this is us sitting in a pew inside, the day Bette tracked me down and made me talk to her…thats why I look just a little bit HYSTERICAL!…oh and heres another one of me leaning into the church organ and shes leaning over me while I show her how to fix it…NOT because Im taking it from behind!….hmmm….ah and Bette handing me the keys to the truck that Psycho Cheri bought me!
Ivan: Uhm..Ladies?
Shane and Tina turned to Ivan who was helping guide Dash over to them.
Dash: Uhm…I know you have no reason to believe me….but Shanes telling the truth.
Tina looked from the girl in Shanes clothes with green streaks in her hair, to Shane, whom shed just noticed had matching streaks in her hair.
Tina: Oh youve got to be kidding me!….Now youve got your conquests defending you!
Shane: Tina shes a….teenager for Christs sake!
Tina: What?… Now youve got standards?
Dash: Wait….nothing is going on with me…I mean Shane and I …or Bette and Shane for that matter…I know Shane is involved with someone else….but she swore she wouldnt tell any of you guys who it is, so shes protecting them when she could easily just end all this.
Shane crossed her arms and looked at the ground, turning her body slightly from Tina.
Dash: That and shes just ***** stupid….
Shanes head snapped up.
Dash:…uhm…the photo of Bette eating with her arm around the person and shes kissing them on lips….that one….well…its not Shane…its me…and were in the cafeteria…the night Bette took Shane and I to the hospital..
Dash moved closer and took the photos from Shane over to Tina.
Dash: Uhm…okay…see this one here….in the corner, you see that hand? Well look back at the photo in the cafeteria…theres the same bracelet.
Dash pulled up her sleeve to show the same bracelet.
Dash: See, I was there, we had lunch on Wednesday on the front steps of the church….and all Bette did was talk about you the whole time….thats why shes laughing and looks so happy…See that leg right there? ….Thats Father Joe…okay maybe you can get a priest to be okay with homosexuality….but would he really sit and have lunch with two people committing adultery at a church, in public?
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I love long update’s! Great job!
yay me too loveeeee long updates. your story is absolutly great and I’m always looking forward to read it.
HAHA love the line about “mini me” from Slim Daddy. Very good chapter can’t wait for the next.
That was a great chapter. I really wondering when Shane gonna finaly tell everybody what she’s doing at the church. waiting for the next fix.
As always a great chapter. I cannot wait for the next thrilling installment!!! Keep up the good work.
Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait to find out what’s planned for Sat…. but I’ll wait if I have to! :)
Hurry up.. post again..waiting for saturday…!!!
GREAT UPDATE!!!
PLEASE POST SOOOOOOON!
A great chapter. I love it.
This in one of my favourite stories. As I am sure it has been said before, it is refreshing to have such wonderful characters like Alice and Shane involved. I know it is practically sacriligious to say it, perhaps grounds for banishment even, but there is other stories to tell besides Bette and Tina! Your storytelling makes me laugh out loud. Please continue.
great update. write more soon, I really want to see how Tina will react to what Bette has planned for her.
Wow, I didn’t know Tina could be such a betty! Can’t wait for the actual surprise to happen manana.
Great chapter and I love your story, please post soon. Thank you!