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The Promise
Tina sobbed as she finished the letter, and leaned in to place a kiss on Bettes cheek in the photo. She turned to walk away and noticed Dash was just staring at the photo in a trance. Tina walked over and ran a hand along her face.
Tina: Youre on fire…why help a woman you barely even know….I mean…..youre sick, why go completely out of your way for….
Dash pointed to the picture and took Tinas arm in her own.
Dash: I could see what Shane saw….even when you werent there…before I met you…
Tina looked up at Shane with tears in her eyes.
Dash: That and when it comes to Bette…
Tina: Its jump on for the ride or get run over.
Dash nodded and smiled.
Tina: You can have it if you want….it really can work..
Dash: What?
Tina: You can find the woman of your dreams.
Dash rolled her eyes and lead Tina towards the door.
Tina:Tell me… are you taking lessons from Bette and Shane:?
Dash: Uhm what do you mean?
Tina: Well between Bettes romantic courting gestures and Shanes infamous charm, well find you a woman in no time.
Dash: And what makes you think Im *****? What is it with you lesbians trying to convert everyone.
Tina: Dash…..hun
Dash: What?
Tina stopped and held her face with both hands.
Tina: As if the photos werent enough…youve been staring at my ***** since I got here….you are a flaming homosexual.
Dash let out a deep sigh and looked down at Tinas cleavage.
Dash: Maybe theyre just irresistible, did you ever think of that?
Tina swatted her on the ***** as she wiggled her eyebrows in a true-to-form Shane maneuver.
Tina: Oh I know they are.
Dash: Come on lets get out of here before Jimminy Cricket gets his panties in a bunch.
Tina laughed as Dash went to guide her out. She looked up and could tell that Dash was struggling to move.
Tina: Thank you…really…I cant believe….
Dash: Just…make sure you take it easy if you see Shane today.
Tina: If? So she backed out completely?
Dash shrugged.
Dash: Oh before I forget…
Dash reached in her tux pocket for the final time.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?