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The Promise
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Dash: Its funny you should say that.
Tina: I was listening to the music and it made me think of it.
Dash nodded and grabbed a hold of the silk.
Dash: So you like the entertainment for the mornings festivities?
Tina nodded and smiled as Dash pulled away the drape from the picture marked Makes Me Whole. Tina couldnt contain the immediate tears that formed from falling from her eyes. Before her, she saw a picture of her and Bette laying together on a blanket. Tinas left hand was interlaced with Bettes and they held them in between their bodies as they slept. Bettes free hand was cupping the back of Tinas head while her hand was in the small of Bettes back. Their foreheads were placed together and legs were intertwined to make the appearance of a heart between their two bodies.
Tina just stood in silence taking in the photo. She couldnt imagine where it came from or who would have taken it. She brought her hand up and traced her finger along the woven fingers, and let the tears fall from her eyes.
Dash: Its okay….no one blames you for…
Tina: Oh…My…God…
Dash: Here we go….
Tina: What did I do…I accused Shane of…oh God…knowing her she probably in some crack den somewhere…doing God knows what with God knows who…
Dash: Hey….maybe you shouldnt go judging her…I think you did enough of that for a lifetime.
Tina held he hand to her forehead as she looked up at the picture.
Tina: What was I thinking….
Dash: You were thinking your wife cheated on you…and you thought she did it again…its understandable….
Tina: I accused one of my best friends of sleeping with my wife.
Dash: Its not as bad as you think it is…trust me….now…we have to get going soon…..its time for then next part of your journey.
Tina wiped her eyes as she took Dashs arm.
Tina: This is amazing, I cant believe she did this….how long…
Dash: Your questions will be answered in the end.
Dash handed Tina another letter.
T…my love
By now youve made it through what I hope you understand is the beauty I see in you. This is what I was talking about the other morning….true beauty. What I see in you while sleeping, is more than I could ever see in any work of art. This picture was taken by Shane three years ago. It was when we fell asleep at the beach party around the bonfire. She said she kept the picture because if she could ever imagine being that close with someone she would know they were the one. Theres something about seeing yourself through someone elses eyes that puts your life into perspective. I love you Tina. Not because you love me back but because you love hard, you love me whole, you love me up and down and you fill me. Youre the only other half that makes me whole. For that I thank you…and Ill never stop loving you.
~B
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Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?