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The Promise
Dash: Do you want to try again?….you dont have to answer that its none of my…
Tina: No.
Dash: Oh..
Tina: Dont get me wrong, I want to have kids, I just think that now I would rather adopt….I can love an adopted child just as much…and I wanted to be pregnant, and I was….I dont have to be pregnant with the next child…if that makes any sense.
Dash: You not wanting to go through the pain of losing another kid makes more sense…but okay Ill take this explanation.
Dash gave Tina a knowing look, and she nodded as they moved on to the next photo marked A New Beginning Tinas naked body was sprawled out on the bed and the sheets were draped around her legs.
Tina: Well that one doesnt leave much to the imagination.
Tina looked up to see Dash blushing.
Tina: So now youre shy?
Dash: No…I just…its different…with youre here on my arm and all…
Tina: So then what are you gonna do when you finally get a woman in bed?
Dash: Well by then….wait…woman?
Tina: Oh Im sorry…its a bad habit of mine to just assume everyone is *****…I meant no offense by it.
They quietly walked over to the other side of the room and studied several more pictures. By the time they reached the last one, Tina had little left of her body that the young woman hadnt seen.
They came to what appeared to be the final picture. Dash became a little uncomfortable as Tina gazed at a photo of her ring sitting on their night stand. Dash pulled out a rose and handed it to Tina. Tina swallowed hard and read out loud.
Tina: Im sorry I hurt you so much that you could ever doubt my love for you.
Tinas eyes began to water. She thought that Bette hadnt noticed that she took off her wedding ring. She suddenly felt both guilty and naked without it. Tina pulled Dash a little tighter.
Tina: It looks so ….I dont know…..not just sad…but empty.
Dash smiled to herself. She pulled Tina over to the last Photo that had a piece of the lavender silk draped over it.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?