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The Promise
Tina: You want the phones or the door?
Alice: Door…Ill slam… you hang up
Tina: Deal!
Alice climbed out of the bed talking the covers with her as she wrapped them around her body and over her head. She opened the front door to see Jenny standing with a single white rose that had a lavender piece of silk tied to it. Alice looked her up and down and took in the pure white Mandarin tuxedo that she wore. Her cropped hair was slicked like James Bond, to match her formal attire. Jennys nervous face fell when she saw Alice.
Jenny: Uh…is Tina here?
Alice: Yeah but what….why are you dressed like that?
Jenny: Oh..I cant really say…but may I come in to speak to her?
Alice: I dont know if…
Tina arrived at the door wrapped in Alices bed sheet.
Tina: Just let her in…Jenny why do you need me…and why are you dressed like that?
Jenny walked in past the women and pulled two cards from her pocket.
Jenny: Ive been asked here this morning to serve as your guide.
Tina: Guide?
Jenny: Yes…if you would be so kind as to dress and come with me, I will take you to your destination….a journey if you will.
Alice: A journey?…to where?
Jenny: We will embark on a journey through the past…and into the future.
Jenny handed the first letter to Tina and she took it with apprehension. Tina opened the envelope and pulled out a linen card that was written on in silver ink.
~My Dearest T-
There was a time when calling you my dearest came easily. I would like to take you back there if you will. I believe that you and I have so much more to give, but in order to get there we should take the time to reflect on our past. There are so many things in my life that I owe to you, and for that I want to give you your own day . Shane has came to take your hand through this journey….
Tina stopped reading and looked at Jenny like she was crazy.
Jenny: Ill explain…just keep going.
…Journey down memory lane. Im sure youre wondering why Im not with you, however, this is about you, not just us. So please Tina, my darling…take Shanes hand and enjoy your day.
Waiting on the other side
~Bette~
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?