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The Promise
Tina: Theres no way in ***** Im going to spend the day with Shane …I…
Jenny handed the card from Shane to Tina. Tina had never actually read something written by Shane, and the natural flow of the calligraphy on the card caught her off guard.
~ Tina,
When the plans were in the making I was asked to be your guide. I thought you wouldnt come today if I showed up, so I switched the roles around for the day. Today is about you, so please put yesterdays events behind you and go with Jenny. If after today you cannot see the love Bette has for you….and you alone, Ill not only help you pack, youll never have to see me again.
~S.A.M
Tina gasped and covered her mouth. She sat on the back edge of the couch and put her head in her hands.
Tina: Now what?
Jenny walked to the door, and brought in a large white box with a lavender bow. Tina handed the two letters over for Alice to read and opened the box to find a beautiful lavender satin gown.. She pulled it out and watched as the dress shimmered in the air before her.
Tina: God …its beautiful….I….
Jenny: Please…Tina…I know what happened yesterday…but if you would put on the dress and…
Tina: Where are we going?
Jenny: You and Bette live the ultimate love story…and as with every story…we need to start at the beginning….
Alice finished the cards and sat next to Tina on the back of the couch.
Alice: Wow I…..are you sure Tee?
Tina nodded.
Tina: I need to at least see what shes done
Alice: And what about last night…everything that happened?
Tina: I was angry…and I meant everything I said…but there is more…theres love…and…if she really did something …this, for me I just need to see what I mean to her if I…before I walk away.
Tina went into the back and quickly changed leaving Jenny and Alice in an awkward silence. Alice heard a cracking noise and Jenny rolled her eyes. She reached under her collar and pulled out an ear piece placing it in her ear. She then spoke into the sleeve of her tuxedo jacket.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?