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The Promise
Jenny: Crouching Tiger to Hidden Dragon…yes shes coming….uhm well she doesnt look too bad…oh I took the ear thinggy out…because you wouldnt stop whistling show tunes in my ear….Look Nancy well be down in like twenty okay….Christ, pull that thong out your ***** already!
Jenny put her head down and looked back at Alice with a smile.
Alice: What the ***** is going on?
Jenny: I cant divulge that at this time…if I told you Id have to kill you.
Alice: So youre helping Bette and Shane with Tina? Is this some twisted cheaters society club?
Jennys jaw dropped at Alices last comment. She walked around and sat on Alices living room couch crossing her legs. She played with the ribbon on the single rose until Tina came out wearing the dress. Jenny heard Alices reaction and turned around.
Alice: Wow Tina, you look…woah.
Jenny walked around the couch and clasped both of her hands together in front of her face. The dress clung to Tinas *****, yet hung from her hips like water cascading over a waterfall. The thick straps complimented her strong shoulders and came around her back to the plunging backline that ended in a V right below the small of her back. The dress appeared to have been fitted with a perfect mold of her body. She turned around to show Alice as the dress flowed with a train behind her.
Tina: Oh…I dont have any…
Jenny reached back into the box beneath the tissued paper and pulled out a pair of crystal heels. Tina took the strappy shoes and put them on. She grabbed her purse and was ready to go.
Tina: Alice thank you so much for last night…I missed that…
Alice: No problem…I think I needed it as much as you.
Tina: Im sorry I keep showing up at your door with theses complete meltdowns.
Alice: Ehhh thats what friends are for.
Tina walked over and gave her a tight hug.
Tina: But not all friends would keep you in their bed all night while you cry and rant and rave like a mad woman.
Alice: Uhm no..most would put you in a padded cell….but Id still be there with you too.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Wow, this was so worth the torture, thanks so much! Ok so I can’t say you’re romantic but can I say that this story is romantic!? ~wink~ Please don’t let me go blue again from lack of oxygen as I’ll be waiting with baited breath for the next one! =0)
Awesome….again. Can anticipation kill a person? Please don’t keep us waiting too long!
omg..YIPPIE its finally here… horray!!!!! you are so awesome.. I love you…please post soon….
Wow this is awesome and beautiful chapter. Bette is surprise Tina the most beautiful thing in the world to her, I just can’t believe Bette have an awesome idea like this. Bette is super super sweetest lover ever. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen and most excited thing coming for Tina. Thank you very much, you are awesome and wonderful writer. 5 stars for you girl!
i was so awestruck by the creativity of this chapter. it made all the rest of them come together so well. thanks for your talent and time. please continue on, it’s great!!!!!
youb know of all the stories ihve read – this one touches me to the core because you capture the essence of true love – of how one feels being totally unselfishly loved and keeping the story as totally real. i can feel the emotions of tina, the pain of dash of not knowing who she is; of shane who feels sad that she is being misunderstood, of alice being so jealous out of her mind but most of all, of bette knowing that tina ia her all and beyond. tks JLo…eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I cried so much…that by far…is the sweetest thing…ive ever read…or seen…or heard of. I loved it…and PLEASE…post soon..
Just want to let you know after the 6 of Mar, I will be AWOL for about a month, Going to have a complete Knee replacement. so unless I can hook up my Laptop I’ll be out of touch, I’ll catch up after. thanks
Sadism: def’n – the pleasure derived from keeping us hangin’ (ergo, the torture). Ecrivez si’il vous plait bientot.
And so it begins, what a wonderful start to MI 1.5’s success. Loved it.
Beautiful. No other words, Just beautiful,, Thanks, Dash is going to be a heart breaker. thanks
I’m at a loss for words here. This is truly amazing. Words do not do it justice….I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the continuance. THANK YOU!
I think you all ready know what I will say, but I won’t because I know it might just put some pressure on you. I’ll simply say, I completely loved this chapter, J. Expect that email. Oh and thanks for blaming me for the hold up on update…now I’ll get hate mail or something. ~winks and heads out~
I could swear I commented on this story yesterday but okay, i’ll do it again. I’m really sucked into this story and I love it, can’t think of other words to say, it’s brilliant. oh and is Dash gonna be okay?