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The Promise
Tina: Uhm Shane..hun what are you looking for..
Shane: Something to put the soup it!
Lara: Shane just grab the pot holders and take the whole thing, Ill pick it up before I leave.
Shane: OKAY!
There was another loud ruckus that caused Tina and Lara to jump with each bang of the pots.
Shane came walking into the room holding the pot as far away from her as possible with two pot holders. Instead of a top, she had a cookie sheet laying over it. Lara just shook her head in horror and Tina laughed. Shane sat the pot on the table and checked her clothes for any spillage. She wore her tuxedo pants with a white wife beater and suspenders underneath her vest.
Shane: What?…at least I covered it, I couldnt find the right size top.
Shane looked at Tina and Lara who were sitting in front of their untouched plates.
Shane: You two have got to be kidding me!…Oh just eat already.
Tina: Hey you try eating something that had you screaming on your knees for hours.
Shane looked at Tina with a serious face. She leaned in until she was inches from her face.
Shane: Tina…I want you to think about what you just said….I ALWAYS eat things that have me screaming on my knees for hours.
Tina thought for a minute and Laras eyes went wide. She covered her mouth as she saw Tinas entire body blush.
Tina: Jesus Shane!
Shane: Yeah they usually scream that too….just eat already….Lara why arent you eating, you made it?
Lara: Hey I have confidence in my cooking, but Tina could just be my downfall.
Shane: Oh Christ you two.
Shane reached down and picked up a heap of food with her fingers and threw it in her mouth.
Shane: Mow ooo heee?
Shane chewed the food and licked her fingers.
Shane: Man Lara…thats spicy…wooooh…damn…I…
Lara: Shane what are you talking about? I didnt make it spicy…
Shane started to cough and searched the table for a glass of water. Her eyes started to water and her face turned red.
Shane: ***** Lara…then why is my mouth on fire.
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(36 votes, average: 4.31 out of 5)
Ah, how romantic. They’re both lucky to be each other’s silver dollar.
this story is definitly a silver dollar
YEEEESSSS!!!!!!! *happy dance* Love this story!
Hey there, thank you so much for the update it made my day…. or night should I say! =0) Ok, I’ve got your story so now all I need is someone to love myself…. well I can dream right? ha ha Ok I have to say thank you again coz I really loved this chapter!! ;)
You know you are a such a beautiful, amazing, romantic, awesome and excellent writer ever. You make Bette and Tina have a wonderful and beautiful day of their life and that was make me so happy for them and hope they will have a wonderful night too. Thank you so muck! Excellent chapter, 10 stars for you girl!
I am speachless. Tha was amazing.
What are you talking about..when you said this sucked. I do not agree in the least bit. Loved the chapter…it was..really..~whispers~…romantic..sorry..but it was! Night.
That was great! I think I may be coming addicted to your story it is 9am in London on a Saturday Morning!! And the first thing i do when i get up is look for an update on this story!! Could this be fanfic heroin?? I dunno, but just remember “Rehab is for Quitters” ;o)
FANTABULOUS !
Un amour magnifique… Thank you so much
OMG!!! That was one of the most beautiful stories I have read you must have such love in your life to be able to express this..THANK YOU!!!
They both have foung their Silver dollar. So glad I found mine and guess what I’m going to keep it. That was so beautiful. thanks so much.
Lword junkie, I could not have said it better myself…JLO you are my silver dollar as well. Thank you so very much!
Your my silver dollar with this story.. you are awesome..thank you for another lovely post
oh my god, i started to cry. That was so emotional and so beautiful.
If I could, I would give you all the stars in the world.
This was absolutely wonderful so full of emotion.
“Shane: Tina…I want you to think about what you just said….I ALWAYS eat things that have me screaming on my knees for hours. ” HAHA! :P