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The Promise
Dash: Mmmm…What….hmmm?
Shane: Time to eat Sundance…
Dash smiled and moved to sit up. Shane helped her and laid a towel over her. She used one bowl to ladle the soup into another and handed it to Dash along with a spoon. She made another bowl and walked it over to Bette.
Bette: Thanks…Im starving.
Dash put her barely eaten bowl on the floor next to the bed and leaned back. Shane and Bette looked at each other with puzzled expressions…
Shane: Uhm you okay man?
Dash smiled.
Dash: Yeah Butch Im fine…just not very hungry…I think Im gonna go back to sleep.
Bette: No you have to eat something…youve barely eaten anything the past two days….just one bowl and you can crash….Dash?….Dash!
Shane ran over to the girl and then relaxed when she saw that she fell asleep.
Bette: Shane keep an eye on her and call me if you need anything…Im gonna head over now….
Bette looked down at the book she was reading. The book of Hamlet was worn, beaten, and barely held in the pages. She ran her hands over the cover and looked out the window into her own backyard.
Shane: Its gonna be fine…really she cant wait to see you Bee….
Bette: I know…I just hope that I can live up to this new standard Ive set.
Shane kneeled beside Bette and placed a hand on her thigh.
Shane: Bette, if you werent ready to live up to the standard, you wouldnt have been able to set it.
Bette smiled and brushed the hair from Shanes face.
Bette: You look great tonight…..like a prince.
Bette stood up and walked out of the room.
Bette: Goodnight sweet Prince…Goodnight.
Shane smiled and waved as she picked up the book and resumed the spot where Bette left off.
Lara and Tina finished with their dessert and leaned back in their chairs.
Tina: Lara …I stand corrected, that was great.
Lara: Thanks…man Im stuffed…can you grab the wine while I get the dishes.
Tina grabbed the bottle of wine and took it to the kitchen. She looked in a drawer for a bottle stopper and found a white rose with another message tied to it. Lara smiled from behind Tina and placed the dishes on the counter. She silently backed out of the room and crossed the living room to walk out through the patio door. Tina read the note to herself.
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(36 votes, average: 4.31 out of 5)
Ah, how romantic. They’re both lucky to be each other’s silver dollar.
this story is definitly a silver dollar
YEEEESSSS!!!!!!! *happy dance* Love this story!
Hey there, thank you so much for the update it made my day…. or night should I say! =0) Ok, I’ve got your story so now all I need is someone to love myself…. well I can dream right? ha ha Ok I have to say thank you again coz I really loved this chapter!! ;)
You know you are a such a beautiful, amazing, romantic, awesome and excellent writer ever. You make Bette and Tina have a wonderful and beautiful day of their life and that was make me so happy for them and hope they will have a wonderful night too. Thank you so muck! Excellent chapter, 10 stars for you girl!
I am speachless. Tha was amazing.
What are you talking about..when you said this sucked. I do not agree in the least bit. Loved the chapter…it was..really..~whispers~…romantic..sorry..but it was! Night.
That was great! I think I may be coming addicted to your story it is 9am in London on a Saturday Morning!! And the first thing i do when i get up is look for an update on this story!! Could this be fanfic heroin?? I dunno, but just remember “Rehab is for Quitters” ;o)
FANTABULOUS !
Un amour magnifique… Thank you so much
OMG!!! That was one of the most beautiful stories I have read you must have such love in your life to be able to express this..THANK YOU!!!
They both have foung their Silver dollar. So glad I found mine and guess what I’m going to keep it. That was so beautiful. thanks so much.
Lword junkie, I could not have said it better myself…JLO you are my silver dollar as well. Thank you so very much!
Your my silver dollar with this story.. you are awesome..thank you for another lovely post
oh my god, i started to cry. That was so emotional and so beautiful.
If I could, I would give you all the stars in the world.
This was absolutely wonderful so full of emotion.
“Shane: Tina…I want you to think about what you just said….I ALWAYS eat things that have me screaming on my knees for hours. ” HAHA! :P