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    The Promise

    Story written on March 5, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 39 – What do you do with a truck full of roses?

    Bette: Tee….I ..

    Tina collided with Bette and wrapped her arms around her clinging to her while her body trembled.

    Tina: Oh God Bette…..I cant believe….

    Bette: Shhh…let me say this first…

    Bette stroked the back of Tinas head and pulled out of their embrace. A breeze swept through the backyard sending rose petals into the air. They swirled around the two lovers as they stood starring deep into each others eyes.

    Bette: I….Im …so….

    Bette started to cry and looked down at her feet. Tina moved forward and brought her chin up so they were looking at each other.

    Tina: Just tell me what your thinking…tell my why you did all this for me.

    Bette: I wanted you to know how much I love you…how Ive always loved you…and…and…

    Tina smiled letting Bette know it was time to buck up and spit it out. Bette rolled her eyes and let out a heavy sigh.

    Bette: This…

    Bette swept her arm in the direction of the pool.

    Bette: Is all for you…but its not nearly enough for the love you give to me everyday.

    Bette reached in her pocket and pulled out a single sterling colored rose That had a long ribbon of silk tied to it. Tina took it and read the message. Tears fell from her eyes and she turned away from Bette. She covered her mouth and started to sink to the ground. Bette came behind her and wrapped her arms around her.

    Bette: Baby?…Tee whats wrong….

    Tina: I…I…

    Tina stood up with Bettes assistance and turned to face Bette. She melted into her and pulled her close trying to bring them together as one body. She brought her lips to Bettes ear and whispered to her between sobs.

    Tina: I never knew I could love you more…but after today..tonight….I just…God I love you so much I cant put it into words….the things you do to me baby…I cant imagine anyone in history ever feeling the love I have for you right now….

    Bette smiled into the nape of Tinas neck.

    Bette: Baby…

    Tina: Yeah?

    Bette: Youre my silver dollar….

    Tina: Forever baby….forever.

    They held each other for what seemed like forever until Tina whispered into Bettes ear.

    Tina: Can you sing my favorite song?

    Bette: You want me to sing Crazy Love?

    Tina: No…I want you to sing the song you sang before….whats it called?

    Bette: Makes me whole…cause you do Tee…you make me whole…

    Tina brought her hands up behind Bettes neck and brought their foreheads together as Bette sang to her while gazing deep into her eyes. They danced together under the moonlight casting their silhouettes out into the pool of the forgotten mistakes of the past. Tina placed the rose between them and crushed it between their two bodies. She melted into Bette and kissed her like shed never kissed her before.

    ~ Tina…Im sorry for my past present and future…Here today, I leave you one rose with an apology attached for every mistake…one for everything Ive ever done wrong,…I also spread rose petals at your feet …one for every day I was blessed enough to love you.~Bette.

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    4. Hey there, thank you so much for the update it made my day…. or night should I say! =0) Ok, I’ve got your story so now all I need is someone to love myself…. well I can dream right? ha ha Ok I have to say thank you again coz I really loved this chapter!! ;)

    5. You know you are a such a beautiful, amazing, romantic, awesome and excellent writer ever. You make Bette and Tina have a wonderful and beautiful day of their life and that was make me so happy for them and hope they will have a wonderful night too. Thank you so muck! Excellent chapter, 10 stars for you girl!

    7. What are you talking about..when you said this sucked. I do not agree in the least bit. Loved the chapter…it was..really..~whispers~…romantic..sorry..but it was! Night.

    8. That was great! I think I may be coming addicted to your story it is 9am in London on a Saturday Morning!! And the first thing i do when i get up is look for an update on this story!! Could this be fanfic heroin?? I dunno, but just remember “Rehab is for Quitters” ;o)

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