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    The Promise

    Story written on March 5, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 39 – What do you do with a truck full of roses?

    ~ Im sorry I measured my love in bottles of wine and fancy dinners~

    Tina put the bottle stopper in the neck of the wine and opened the fridge to find a large bouquet of white roses. She covered her mouth and removed the single rose that had a ribbon tied to it.

    ~ Im sorry I take for granted, the day to day things you do to run our home~

    Tina held back her tears and stood up to face Lara, only to find her gone. She looked around the kitchen and walked to the living room. She flipped on the light switch and gasped. The floor was covered in white rose petals. The coffee table, bookshelf, entertainment center and end tables were covered in white roses with lavender strips of silk tied to them. She picked up a hand full of roses and saw that they all had messages on them.

    ~ Im sorry I never pick up the dry cleaning.~
    ~Im sorry it takes a holiday or anniversary for me to show you I love you~
    ~Im sorry I take for granted how much you sacrificed to be with me~

    Tina started to cry with full on waterworks. Something caught her eye outside and she moved to the patio door. She felt her knees buckle and held the sliding door handle for support. She placed her forehead against the cool glass and sobbed until she had enough strength to open the door. Tina opened the door and stepped out into the soothing moonlight to see Bette standing on the other side to the pool. There before her was the patio covered in white and sterling rose petals. Floating in the pool where candles and what looked like hundreds of white roses with messages tied to them interlaced with red rose petals. She took a shaky step and stopped to catch her breath.

    Tina hiked up her dress and walked as fast as she could to meet Bette. She approached Bette, who turned around quickly when she heard Tina coming. Tina stopped arms length from Bette and took in what she was wearing. Her white tuxedo clung to her in all the right spots. She wore a lavender vest and tie that matched Tinas dress perfectly.

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    4. Hey there, thank you so much for the update it made my day…. or night should I say! =0) Ok, I’ve got your story so now all I need is someone to love myself…. well I can dream right? ha ha Ok I have to say thank you again coz I really loved this chapter!! ;)

    5. You know you are a such a beautiful, amazing, romantic, awesome and excellent writer ever. You make Bette and Tina have a wonderful and beautiful day of their life and that was make me so happy for them and hope they will have a wonderful night too. Thank you so muck! Excellent chapter, 10 stars for you girl!

    7. What are you talking about..when you said this sucked. I do not agree in the least bit. Loved the chapter…it was..really..~whispers~…romantic..sorry..but it was! Night.

    8. That was great! I think I may be coming addicted to your story it is 9am in London on a Saturday Morning!! And the first thing i do when i get up is look for an update on this story!! Could this be fanfic heroin?? I dunno, but just remember “Rehab is for Quitters” ;o)

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