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The Promise
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Dash: I cant take you anywhere without causing a scene can I?
Dash pulled on Shanes wife-beater and looked at all the writing on it.
Shane: Sorry, this is my first time back here in months.
Dash: Meet any new prospects?
Shane held up her cast that was signed on ever available space of white, with names and numbers.
Dana: Youve got to be kidding meyou filled that cast out in one day?
Shane: Actually, this is just since I walked in the doorand my shirt too
Dash leaned back to show Dana that Shanes shirt had been written on as well. Several women explicit promises of fantasies they would volunteer to fulfill if given the opportunity.
Jenny flung her head back and laughed when she saw the disgusted look on Danas face. Lara choked on her own laugh when Dana turned to her in astonishment.
Dash: So Betteyou really want to dance?
Bette: What kind of music do you dance to?
Dash: I can dance to anything!
Bette gave Dash a skeptical look.
Bette: youve been hanging out with Romeo too muchher delusions of rhythm are rubbing off on you.
Tina: I dont know babyShane can hold her ownSo Im gonna have to say Dash probably can too if she says she can.
Bette: How would you know Tee?
Tina: Shanes taken me on a few trips around the dance floor.
Bette: When?
Shane looked over at Bette and wiggled her eyebrows.
Shane: Lets just say I took her on a date onceand there were private lessons
Bette: They better not have gotten horizontal (she grumbled under her breath)
Dash jumped out of Shanes lap and pulled a tipsy Bette out of Tinas
Dash: Come on Bee, lets show the rest of these old ladies how its done.
Bette: Im not sure if you just insulted me too.but either way Im game.
Bette walked off with Dashs arm slung over her shoulder and her own around the lanky girls waist. From behind, anyone and everyone would think Shane and Bette were the two vixens about to let loose. Shane smiled as she watched them walk off. Soon a waitress was standing before her waiting for her drink order.
Shane: Nothing for me thankscant mix with the meds
Shane held up her cast for the woman to see. Her low tones were muffled by the loud pounding beat of the music the DJ was spinning. However, the girls knew what she asked when she soon fell to her knees in front of Shane and signed her name and number along the zipper of Shanes pants. As she made her way back up to her full height, she brushed her finger tips along Shanes lips and puckered a kiss her direction. Shane gave a wink and her trademark smile that made all the girls drip with desire. She licked her lips and turned back to the table to see Tina, Lara and Jenny laughing as Dana just shook her head in disgust. Shane laughed and for the first time, realized she was sitting next to Alice.
okay ladies the songs are coming backfor the next half of this scene download how come you dont call me by Alicia Key..BUT THE REMIX W/ Justin Timberlake! It has some meaning obviously to the storyand how, see you on the flip side.!
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i don’t get it, does shane even want to get back with alice because it doesn’t seem so. great update!
patient i am.
long you make us wait…
Sorry I’ve been MIA but I’ve caught up on your story and thank god i did, it’s amazing as always and even though i’m a cripple today i did a little dance of happiness coz i saw your post!! lol Can’t wait for more and thank you!!!! =0)
Brilliant as always. Oh yeah and Laissez les bons temps rouler means let the good times roll.
hey there, new reader. i love this story, its great, im and huge Alice/Shane fan. its kinda weird i guess because they wernt/arnt together on the show. anyhow, i love your story, but i was also wondering how much you know about HIV/AIDS. if shane had it.. shes not really putting anyone at risk unless they have a huge cut and like.. mash it in with her cuts, it has to go into the blood. Alice.. i guess could have gotten it, but only if she had cuts, or cuts/sores in her mouth. maybe HIV/AIDS wasnt the way you were headed with this, but its just something to think about, also lol i dont want shane to have a disease, or give it to anyone else. anyhow, awesome story, i hope alice and shane get back together.
I love very much this chapter but if I was Alice, I didn’t know what to do about Shane but I suppose, no I believe you know what.
Great one again. I just wondering if by the end of your story we will know what happen to Shane in the past to have such a big medical file. Cuz I still asking myself “What the hell did happen to Shane?” But I’m trusting you that you gonna tell us ~wink and go get beer~ Need a fix soon.
GREAT CHAPTER…YOUR A GREAT WRITER
FINALLY BEEN WAITING SO LONG MY COMPUTER COLLECTED DUST. HA HA JUST KIDDING IT WAS GREAT TO SEE YOUR BACK AND WRITING OF COURSE.
Lol really great dialogues, very dinamics..and really funny: Great the kid’s gone crazy too…..got my share of dash and dana…now i’m really looking forward for shane and alice!!!! thanks…adios y besos
I don’t think I have heard the remix with JT I will have to look for that. I was thinking maybe some Kiesha cole you know the one where AK did the beat for her, that would be hot
I see Raven translated the phrase for you. Do you really think I would insult you and expect another chapter ?! ;-) Keep it coming!
lol i sure did read everything in one night…next day i was a zombie…but a happy one though :P. Ok you are making us suffer!! poor Alice…camon Shane needs to get back to Al…they need eachother…they are so great toguether ;D. This chapter was great but so short *sniff* and i hope you get your computer fixed very fast!. I can’t wait for next chapter!!.
This is absolutely my favorite story cause it makes me happy to see that you have posted. Best wishes your computer. Good Job.
Good chapter. Well I hope that Shane and Alice could have a talk and see how is turn out, I just wan’t they happy and be with each other. Post soon, thank you!
Funny as always!!! I’m still around and I’m getting to furry Dana again… so far I’ve only written the recap but I’ll get there LOL…
Loved this chapter!!! You just get better and better. Your story is the first one I look for. I’m glad Bette @ Shane Settled their argument. Ihope Shane @ Alice talk so they can work At getting back together. I hope your computer gets fixed soon because your story is just too good to be without. Thank you for going to so much effort to post this chapter it was worth the wait.