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The Promise
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Bette arrived with their drinks having Jenny and Lara closely behind. Bette sat the drinks on the table and pulled Alice to her feet before Tina could ask what was wrong. Bette brought Alice outside and finally let her go, only to cross her arms and tap her foot impatiently.
Alice: Look Bette, I ***** miss her okayChrist!
Bette rolled her eyes in a huff.
Alice: Ive been waiting here for a ***** hour, and shes not hereand you werent herewhere were you by the way?
Bette curled her lip up and gave Alice a sly grin.
Alice: Godyou two ***** like rabbitsgood to know you were thinking of me in my time of needwhat do I do? Will you ***** say something already?
Bette: Aliceits time to shape up or ship out! You want her back?
Alice nodded without hesitation.
Bette: Then put your money where your mouth is and go fight for Shane or youll lose her, before you ever had her.
Bette turned on her heels matter-of-factly and charged back into the Planet, where she plopped down in Tinas lap. She sipped on her drink as Alice walked over with a completely different attitude.
Alice: Hey guys, you look beat!
Alice watched as Lara sunk down in her plush booth seat next to Jenny where they were laying on each other, fighting to stay awake.
Jenny: Were soooo understaffed for the morning and night shifts.
Lara: Yeah, but we cant find people to work the rush shiftstheres three and they only last about three to four hours.
Lara closed her eyes and melted into Jenny.
Dana: Im sure youll figure something out baby.
Lara smiled with her eyes closed as Dana leaned over and pressed a kiss to her forehead. Dana sat beside the two exhausted women, and leaned into them also.
Tina: You guys look how I feel.
Dana: I got my ***** handed to me today
Bette: Whats with everyone? This table is so morbid
Bette knocked back Tinas drink as she finished her own.
Bette: Come on guys, lets go dance or something, instead of sitting here like were deadTee, wanna dance?
Tina: Im sorry babe, Im exhausted, and I had meetings to discuss meetings today.
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i don’t get it, does shane even want to get back with alice because it doesn’t seem so. great update!
patient i am.
long you make us wait…
Sorry I’ve been MIA but I’ve caught up on your story and thank god i did, it’s amazing as always and even though i’m a cripple today i did a little dance of happiness coz i saw your post!! lol Can’t wait for more and thank you!!!! =0)
Brilliant as always. Oh yeah and Laissez les bons temps rouler means let the good times roll.
hey there, new reader. i love this story, its great, im and huge Alice/Shane fan. its kinda weird i guess because they wernt/arnt together on the show. anyhow, i love your story, but i was also wondering how much you know about HIV/AIDS. if shane had it.. shes not really putting anyone at risk unless they have a huge cut and like.. mash it in with her cuts, it has to go into the blood. Alice.. i guess could have gotten it, but only if she had cuts, or cuts/sores in her mouth. maybe HIV/AIDS wasnt the way you were headed with this, but its just something to think about, also lol i dont want shane to have a disease, or give it to anyone else. anyhow, awesome story, i hope alice and shane get back together.
I love very much this chapter but if I was Alice, I didn’t know what to do about Shane but I suppose, no I believe you know what.
Great one again. I just wondering if by the end of your story we will know what happen to Shane in the past to have such a big medical file. Cuz I still asking myself “What the hell did happen to Shane?” But I’m trusting you that you gonna tell us ~wink and go get beer~ Need a fix soon.
GREAT CHAPTER…YOUR A GREAT WRITER
FINALLY BEEN WAITING SO LONG MY COMPUTER COLLECTED DUST. HA HA JUST KIDDING IT WAS GREAT TO SEE YOUR BACK AND WRITING OF COURSE.
Lol really great dialogues, very dinamics..and really funny: Great the kid’s gone crazy too…..got my share of dash and dana…now i’m really looking forward for shane and alice!!!! thanks…adios y besos
I don’t think I have heard the remix with JT I will have to look for that. I was thinking maybe some Kiesha cole you know the one where AK did the beat for her, that would be hot
I see Raven translated the phrase for you. Do you really think I would insult you and expect another chapter ?! ;-) Keep it coming!
lol i sure did read everything in one night…next day i was a zombie…but a happy one though :P. Ok you are making us suffer!! poor Alice…camon Shane needs to get back to Al…they need eachother…they are so great toguether ;D. This chapter was great but so short *sniff* and i hope you get your computer fixed very fast!. I can’t wait for next chapter!!.
This is absolutely my favorite story cause it makes me happy to see that you have posted. Best wishes your computer. Good Job.
Good chapter. Well I hope that Shane and Alice could have a talk and see how is turn out, I just wan’t they happy and be with each other. Post soon, thank you!
Funny as always!!! I’m still around and I’m getting to furry Dana again… so far I’ve only written the recap but I’ll get there LOL…
Loved this chapter!!! You just get better and better. Your story is the first one I look for. I’m glad Bette @ Shane Settled their argument. Ihope Shane @ Alice talk so they can work At getting back together. I hope your computer gets fixed soon because your story is just too good to be without. Thank you for going to so much effort to post this chapter it was worth the wait.