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The Promise
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Bette: Alice? Come on you love to dance.
Alice: Woah! Chill back FootlooseI have my own Mission Impossible tonight.
Dash: Im downif you think you can keep up!
Dana cringed and clenched her jaw while covering her closed eyes with her free hand.
Dana: No God! Please tell me Im hallucinating from heat stroke.
Tina: Uhm.Dash? Hun, what are you
Dash whipped out a card from her back pocket and displayed it for the table.
Dash: Meet the first and only official VIP Member of the Planet.
Dana: This cant be happening.isnt it enough I had to eat breakfast with her all weeknow I cant have a single civilized moment to relaxwhat the ***** was Marina thinking?
Lara rolled her eyes and tucked the stray hairs behind Danas ear before she dramatically slammed her head against the table.
Bette: Howd you get here?
Tina: Please tell me you didnt
Dash: No we took a cab.
Jenny: We?
Dash: YeahWE
Dash pointed to her side, and realized for the first time that she was standing alone.
Dana: Great the kids gone crazy too.
Dash: Fucknot again!
Alice: Hey whats going on in the middle of the dance floor?
Dash ran towards a large huddle of women in the center of the dance floor. She pushed and pulled her way in and emerged with a disheveled Shane. Many women held each other back as they made a move to attack Dash for her interruption of the mob. She pulled Shane to the table and flung her in the only open chair between Bette and Alice. Dash quickly flopped down in her lap and shook her head in disappointment.
Shane linked eyes with Bette and felt ashamed for her actions earlier in the day. She reached beneath her denim jacket and pulled out a flat pink rose which she held out for Bette with apologetic eyes. Bettes eyes glazed over as she too felt horrible about what had transcribed earlier and nodded as she took the rose.
Dash: Awethey kiss and make up.Im still your favorite girl aye?
Dash nudged Shane with her elbow and Shane nodded.
Shane: Damn straight.
Shane wrapped her arms around Dash and brought her in so close her legs kicked up playfully off the floor. Alices face went ghostly white as she watched Shane and Dash who had their backs turned to her.
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i don’t get it, does shane even want to get back with alice because it doesn’t seem so. great update!
patient i am.
long you make us wait…
Sorry I’ve been MIA but I’ve caught up on your story and thank god i did, it’s amazing as always and even though i’m a cripple today i did a little dance of happiness coz i saw your post!! lol Can’t wait for more and thank you!!!! =0)
Brilliant as always. Oh yeah and Laissez les bons temps rouler means let the good times roll.
hey there, new reader. i love this story, its great, im and huge Alice/Shane fan. its kinda weird i guess because they wernt/arnt together on the show. anyhow, i love your story, but i was also wondering how much you know about HIV/AIDS. if shane had it.. shes not really putting anyone at risk unless they have a huge cut and like.. mash it in with her cuts, it has to go into the blood. Alice.. i guess could have gotten it, but only if she had cuts, or cuts/sores in her mouth. maybe HIV/AIDS wasnt the way you were headed with this, but its just something to think about, also lol i dont want shane to have a disease, or give it to anyone else. anyhow, awesome story, i hope alice and shane get back together.
I love very much this chapter but if I was Alice, I didn’t know what to do about Shane but I suppose, no I believe you know what.
Great one again. I just wondering if by the end of your story we will know what happen to Shane in the past to have such a big medical file. Cuz I still asking myself “What the hell did happen to Shane?” But I’m trusting you that you gonna tell us ~wink and go get beer~ Need a fix soon.
GREAT CHAPTER…YOUR A GREAT WRITER
FINALLY BEEN WAITING SO LONG MY COMPUTER COLLECTED DUST. HA HA JUST KIDDING IT WAS GREAT TO SEE YOUR BACK AND WRITING OF COURSE.
Lol really great dialogues, very dinamics..and really funny: Great the kid’s gone crazy too…..got my share of dash and dana…now i’m really looking forward for shane and alice!!!! thanks…adios y besos
I don’t think I have heard the remix with JT I will have to look for that. I was thinking maybe some Kiesha cole you know the one where AK did the beat for her, that would be hot
I see Raven translated the phrase for you. Do you really think I would insult you and expect another chapter ?! ;-) Keep it coming!
lol i sure did read everything in one night…next day i was a zombie…but a happy one though :P. Ok you are making us suffer!! poor Alice…camon Shane needs to get back to Al…they need eachother…they are so great toguether ;D. This chapter was great but so short *sniff* and i hope you get your computer fixed very fast!. I can’t wait for next chapter!!.
This is absolutely my favorite story cause it makes me happy to see that you have posted. Best wishes your computer. Good Job.
Good chapter. Well I hope that Shane and Alice could have a talk and see how is turn out, I just wan’t they happy and be with each other. Post soon, thank you!
Funny as always!!! I’m still around and I’m getting to furry Dana again… so far I’ve only written the recap but I’ll get there LOL…
Loved this chapter!!! You just get better and better. Your story is the first one I look for. I’m glad Bette @ Shane Settled their argument. Ihope Shane @ Alice talk so they can work At getting back together. I hope your computer gets fixed soon because your story is just too good to be without. Thank you for going to so much effort to post this chapter it was worth the wait.