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The quicker, the better Chapter4part2
Previously:
Dana was sat holding onto Alice just as tight as Alice was holding her not being able to control herself any longer, tears flowing as she had just found out the one person, the only person she has ever truly wanted, wanted her in return. This is all she had ever dreamed of and it seemed unreal. At least now she knew why
Alice and Dana sat holding onto each other for what seemed like an eternity, both content in each other’s arms, the only sound being made were their hearts beating, beating as one.
Calm started to settle in both of them and that was when
“Dana”
“Yeah”
“Do you want to look at me yet”
“No, I look like *****, you really don’t want to see me, I may scare you.”
“Thanks Al”
“I’m only joking, listen we will count to three and then at the same time both look at each other. Ok?”
“On three or after three?” Dana replied unsure.
Dana smiled, ‘I’m a cute geek’ she thought before answering
“Yeah, after sounds great. Ready?”
“Onetwothree” both girls counted out load before both slowly lifting their heads to face one another
“Arrrghh Dana you’re scaring me”
Dana who’s face was wet through with tears and eyes puffy, hit Alice playfully, telling her to shut up and look in the mirror as she was not looking to hot herself.
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(33 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
enjoying your story very much
This one is even better than the first part. I loved it! The kiss was absolutely wonderful and you put the french line so well. They’re soooo cute.
Ps I love the Dana’s shirt (I’m with stupid)
Soooo….CUTE!…I luv this story..And the french, very sexy..please Post Soon!.. Like real soon. Thnx 4 writing…
Hi laughsalot. Ive just caught up with your last couple of chapters and i love it soo much. Alice and Dana are my favorite couple and you write them so well. I love how you kept both a mix of humour and tension in the lead up to the 4am kiss. Thank you and i cant wait to next post.
So sweet and cute! Yeah, it’ll always be 4am for me. We’re such hopeless romantics.
as soon at she said it was 3:58a i smiled. danish are such hopeless romantics.