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The quicker, the better Chapter4part2
“Great choice Dana”
“Well you are with stupid. I am stupid for not talking to you sooner and”
“Yes you are stupid but not because of that but because of the comment you just made. I didn’t tell you either remember so go easy on yourself. Ok.”
Dana just nodded in agreement.
“You know Dana you have seen these baby’s before so don’t go all shy on me now.”
Dana looked back up at
“I’ve seen you check them out once or twice you know, and how could you not, they are enough to turn a straight girl *****!”
“No I haven’t!”
“Err yes you have don’t deny it, it’s ok, I don’t mind, I think their, my best assets. I am so proud at the fact they get so much attention”
Dana started go a bit red with embarrassment , so she decided to go back to the living room and wait for Alice there.
When Alice went back to Dana she was laid on the sofa with her arms folded looking up towards the ceiling obviously still a bit nervous, so Alice picked her legs up, sat down and placed them back over her.
“Where do we go from here Al, I mean you know I like you, and you like me but still my head is all over the place. I need to know if you are just well attracted to me or whether it’s more than that?”
“Dana, I told you I am crazy about you”
Dana jumps in “I know, sorry. I just want to know why and how long and if you even feel a little of how much I feel for you.”
This time
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(33 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
enjoying your story very much
This one is even better than the first part. I loved it! The kiss was absolutely wonderful and you put the french line so well. They’re soooo cute.
Ps I love the Dana’s shirt (I’m with stupid)
Soooo….CUTE!…I luv this story..And the french, very sexy..please Post Soon!.. Like real soon. Thnx 4 writing…
Hi laughsalot. Ive just caught up with your last couple of chapters and i love it soo much. Alice and Dana are my favorite couple and you write them so well. I love how you kept both a mix of humour and tension in the lead up to the 4am kiss. Thank you and i cant wait to next post.
So sweet and cute! Yeah, it’ll always be 4am for me. We’re such hopeless romantics.
as soon at she said it was 3:58a i smiled. danish are such hopeless romantics.