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The quicker, the better Chapter4part2
Dana was gutted she was leaving, but there was nothing she could do, so she reluctantly got up to follow
On reaching the door
“So I will ring you after work, is that ok?”
“Yes of course it is” Dana smiled. They both stood there looking deep into each others eyes not wanting to break away. Dana chewed on the inside of her cheek,
“What time is it now”
Dana looked at her watch “Exactly
“Well I would say that’s the perfect time for our first kiss”
Dana’s eyes widened, her heart singing out loud Alice,
Dana wrapped both her arms around
Then their lips touched, only softly though, on this both felt as if they were both stood still and their soundings were spinning around them. Just then the kiss became more intense
“la courbe de tes yeux fais le tour de mon Coeur”
Dana heart cried happily at this even though she had no clue what it meant.
“What does that mean?”
“It’s French and you will just have to look it up if you really want to know”
“I didn’t know you can speak French Al, that’s so *****”
“Well then that’s one thing you have just learnt about me”
Dana stood with her back lent against the door with her head back, not knowing Alice was doing the exact same thing on the other side each grinning widely thinking
‘I think I have just died and gone to heaven’
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(33 votes, average: 4.03 out of 5)
enjoying your story very much
This one is even better than the first part. I loved it! The kiss was absolutely wonderful and you put the french line so well. They’re soooo cute.
Ps I love the Dana’s shirt (I’m with stupid)
Soooo….CUTE!…I luv this story..And the french, very sexy..please Post Soon!.. Like real soon. Thnx 4 writing…
Hi laughsalot. Ive just caught up with your last couple of chapters and i love it soo much. Alice and Dana are my favorite couple and you write them so well. I love how you kept both a mix of humour and tension in the lead up to the 4am kiss. Thank you and i cant wait to next post.
So sweet and cute! Yeah, it’ll always be 4am for me. We’re such hopeless romantics.
as soon at she said it was 3:58a i smiled. danish are such hopeless romantics.