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    The quicker, the better Chapter4part2

    Alice smiled and stood up knowing Dana was lying. “Come on hot stuff walk me to the door” she said pulling Dana up with her hands

     

    Dana was gutted she was leaving, but there was nothing she could do, so she reluctantly got up to follow Alice. Alice kept hold of one of Dana’s hands and motioned her head towards the door. Dana couldn’t help but smile just as her heart was doing.

     

    On reaching the door Alice turned to face Dana and grabbed hold of her other hand now holding both of them she shyly said

     

    “So I will ring you after work, is that ok?”

     

    “Yes of course it is” Dana smiled. They both stood there looking deep into each others eyes not wanting to break away. Dana chewed on the inside of her cheek, Alice was swaying both their arms.

     

    “What time is it now” Alice asked

     

    Dana looked at her watch “Exactly 4am“

     

    “Well I would say that’s the perfect time for our first kiss”

     

    Dana’s eyes widened, her heart singing out loud Alice, Alice.

     

    Alice took one step forward placed Dana’s hair behind her ears and kept her hand there. Her other hand slowly moving up Dana’s arm over her shoulder and stopped upon reaching her neck.

     

    Dana wrapped both her arms around Alice and rested them at the bottom of her back, not once did either of them take their eyes off each other.

     

    Then their lips touched, only softly though, on this both felt as if they were both stood still and their soundings were spinning around them. Just then the kiss became more intense Alice‘s tongue entered Dana’s mouth meeting hers, they seemed to dance to the same beat. Each could feel each others emotions meeting and becoming one. Dana pulled gently on Alice‘s bottom lip with her teeth, Alice smiled into her and then pulled Dana even closer before they started to explore each other’s mouths once again. Their tongues crashing like waves against each other, both beginning to breathe heavily it was like their souls were being sucked out of them, all in one kiss. They both quietly moaned, so turned on it was making their knees go weak. Gradually their kiss slowed back down until Alice pulled away looking straight at Dana she said

     

    “la courbe de tes yeux fais le tour de mon Coeur”

     

    Dana heart cried happily at this even though she had no clue what it meant.

     

    “What does that mean?”

     

    “It’s French and you will just have to look it up if you really want to know” Alice teased.

     

    “I didn’t know you can speak French Al, that’s so *****”  

     

    “Well then that’s one thing you have just learnt about me” Alice whispered before kissing Dana sweetly. “Now I really have to go.” Alice winked at Dana who sighed, Alice giggled and then before Dana knew it she was gone.

     

    Dana stood with her back lent against the door with her head back, not knowing Alice was doing the exact same thing on the other side each grinning widely thinking

     

    ‘I think I have just died and gone to heaven’  

     

     

     

    Comments

    1. This one is even better than the first part. I loved it! The kiss was absolutely wonderful and you put the french line so well. They’re soooo cute.
      Ps I love the Dana’s shirt (I’m with stupid)

    2. Hi laughsalot. Ive just caught up with your last couple of chapters and i love it soo much. Alice and Dana are my favorite couple and you write them so well. I love how you kept both a mix of humour and tension in the lead up to the 4am kiss. Thank you and i cant wait to next post.

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