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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 15
Wow. This is so out of control, said Bette.
Sure is. I almost had to pop one of my boys in the head. That whole bisexual reference just really got em all excited. They all think youre some kinda freak. I got a workout just setting them straight., said Damon.
Bette smiled. Thank you. I really appreciate that. You are a really good boyfriend., she said with a wink.
Anything for the girl that captured my moms heart. She wont stop talking about you. Hows Bette? Did you talk to Bette? Tell Bette I said hi., said Damon.
Glad to see I made a lasting impression., said Bette.
Yes, you did leave a very good impression. I dread the day I have to tell my mom the truth. Youre like a dream come true for her., said Damon.
Well, thanks again for defending my honor. Are you coming to the Dance Marathon today?, asked Bette.
Damon smiled. Wouldnt miss it. I have my sponsors and everything. Ill be getting my groove on all night and all day tomorrow.
Thats great. Im glad you signed up., said Bette.
That is great. Youre pretty cool, Damon., said Dana.
No problem. Its a good cause and I get to shake my *****. Its a win-win situation., he said.
They laughed and talked for the next 20 minutes before Dana and Bette, dressed in their matching purple Dance Marathon shirts, headed out to start getting things ready for the nights event.
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At noon, Tina, David, and Kara walked out of Royce Hall with big smiles on their faces. Their presentation had gone very well and they were riding their accomplishment high.
We rocked it today. We totally rocked it., said David.
Yes we did. Ours looked so professional., said Tina.
Yeah, it did. Did you see that one group? It was like they didnt even try. You guys, this was my last project. Im officially done with finals week. We need to celebrate., said Kara.
Yes. Lets go grab a celebratory lunch. Tina, you in?, asked David.
Yeah, Im in. Lets do sushi at Tengu., said Tina.
Excellent., said Kara.
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THANK GOD!! I was really worried for a minute. You tease. lol Thank you SO much for not breaking them up. I LOVE this story so much!!! You rock!
Great story. It’s very inspiring, I like the fact that your very true to your characters. Keep going.
WooHoo!!! Thank God…you scared the shit out of me, MTS!!! Way to go Tina!!!!!
glad Tina’s finally woke up. Another great chapter. Thanx.
WOW!! that’s a great chapter!! can’t wait to read the next one!!
OMG!!! You really had me going there for a minute. Thakn you for not breaking them up!!! A love like theirs can overcome anything, right???
WOW! You almost broke my heart there! This was just wonderful:))))
Perfect…absolutely brilliant. I’ve finally been moved to have a tear in my eye. Whew, one of the most moving chapters so far!
Dear lord I’m going to have a stroke! OMG this was totally freaking amazing! You just made my entire day! WOO FREAKING HOO! I need to calm down now, I need to go listen to a song by Enya. More soon. Whew!
I thought they were gonna break up..man that was good, but what is tina gonna do now…maybe her parents love her enough to not disown her
I have been reading your story for long while now and I just have to say that it is the absolute best on here. Congrats and post again soon,
Yes yes and yes. Thank you.
Now this is a heck of an update…nice job, I’m all smiles.
THAT WAS A AWESOME CHAPTER..I AM SO GLAD SHE DIDN’T BREAK UP WITH BETTE….LOVE THIS PLEASE POST SOON
WOW!!! That was Beautiful Awesome I’m really Happy and WOW! Thank you for not breaking them up Thank you Thank you WOW anyway It’s really good I’m really intense after I read OMG there belong to each other you really scared me I thought they gonna breaking up Please don’t MTS Thank you again for the Amazing Story.
OMG!!! Loved it!So happy Tina didnt breal up with Bette you had me scared there.please post soon very soon!!hopoefully we’ll read about Tina and Bette getting their groove on LOL
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
B&T!!!!!!!! I always knew Tina was smart!!! I am still worried about her parents. Hopefully they can have some fun and not think about parents for a long time!*wink* I think they deserve some sexual healing!
I’m patiently awaiting the next chapter, when Bette introduces Tina to Damon’s mama!
Oh boy!!!!
I’m glad Alice got to see this with her own eyes!!!
Thank you.
P.S: Did Alice meet Tina before this? I don’t remember.
OHH THANK YOU GOD!!!!!! That’s what I’m talking about, now all that’s left to unfold is the parent drama and any other wired and wonderful thing you can come up with. Great writing, this has to be my fav chapter!
OMG, this is the cutest love ever..
MTS, you remained true to form! Thanks!! Oh by the way, another descriptive for Bette could possibly be “golden brown” but I personally like the words you use for her.
your storyis great i love it i cant wait till the next chapter comes out i have been waiting for tina to smartin up and now that she did i cant wait thanks
I’m pretty sure this is exactly why you won an award. I thought we were heading for a major angst blowout and I was scared. You swept in at the last second and saved us! I love this story. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
YAY!!!!!!!!! Ahhh you really had me going their, MTS!! You sure know how to make a girl cry! :D Thank you soooo much!!!! God I love your story!
P.S. – Congrats on your award! I got so excited when I found out you won!!
No words can describe how amazing this story is! I was glad you brought up the room problem. I have wondered from the begining what would happen if they broke up or even had a bad fight. Dorm rooms are so small!!:)
MTS, i have only just had to oportunity to catch up on this awesome story of yours but i gotta tell ya…. it’s sooo good, it should be illegal….lol….Thankyou for not breaking them up:)~letting out the breath i was holding for the entire chapter almost ….phew~
Congrats on the award too……..Very deserving..More soon please:)
I am SO happy I don’t know what to do with myself!! I read your stroy hours ago but I was just TOO excited to sit down and comment. I had to go share the good news!!! I am a major fan and I was definitely begining to get nervous. After reading each chapter, I would have this nervous feeling in the pit of my stomache. And truth be told, as I read this chapter I was convinced that Tina was going to run. But then she stopped seeing and thinking with her head and began using her heart. Their trials have only just begun but it’s better to endure pain with someone you love and trust than to live a pain-free life alone. I love this story!!!
OMG! You really had me going there for awhile. So glad Tina came around. Your chapters are amazing and yet they just keep getting better and better. Don’t know how you do it, but please continue!
Every reader finds herself.The writer’s work is merely a kind of optical instrument that makes it possible for the reader to discern what, without this story, she would perhaps never have seen in herself. This is so true with your story!!!!
Excellent! I love this story. Please continue.
Yes, Tina finally found the key to the closet. I’m looking forward to how you write the parents into Tina’s self-discovery, presuming they will be thrown in for some well positioned drama! Brilliant , as asways MTS. And just an aside, I’m at the front of the queue as one of your biggest fans. Thanks so much for writing.
Whew.. that was a rollercoaster – I love these two. Awesome, Awesome coming out story.
Oh, that was a good one! Congratulations on your well deserved award too!
Yes!!!!!
AB-SO-LUTE-LY
PERFECT!!!!!!!!
I just had to scroll lower to see the outcome.I am very satisfied.Great update.
OMG…love this…this chapter so so good, see tina finally saw the light.
Congrats on the award
Thank the gods for mercy! Beautiful story
I finally caught up with the story, and can now leave a comment. You are a fantastic writer, and this story is great. Keep it coming, please. :)
Whew I can breathe again! You had me believing Tina was going to wimp out on Bette. Thank goodness she came to her senses! Another fabulous chapter MTS!
WOW…WOW..WOW..WOW…WOW…Mind Blowing…unbelievable…beautiful…etc…love this story…amazing…
my brain is completely fried after getting through my finals… but this story was definately work the risk of losing more brain cells due to lack of sleep. You’ve done an amazing job with this story; the emotions are painfully real and the characters are so easy to relate to that they feel like they’re actually personal friends. Great job and please post more as soon as you can!
OH THANK GOD! you had me so freaking worried i almost had a heart attack! you write so freaking well! my heart was constricting then i was happy, it was phenomenal!!! i can’t wait for you to continue!!!!!!!!
CHEEEEE-HOOOOOO!!!!!!! Omg, I so love you right now!! You brought our girls back together…this chapter just so made my night!! You go TINA!! You tell the world that Bette Porter is your woman and yours alone! Thank you MTS…YOU ROCK!!
mts i think you need to put a warning at the start of these intense chapters like: breathing apparatus recommended..read atyour own risk.loved it ,tina will feel so much better now and bette too.yeh!!
Hey congrats on your award, I just love your story because it contains so much drama and of course it’s about Bette and Tinas beginning and who doesn’t love that anyway sorry I haven’t posted on your previous chapters, I just finished catching up. K is right you Rock!
Wow! I REALLY LIKED this story. For some time, I thought it was kind of losing some track, but it came back stronger. I’m glad! ;)
WOOO HOOO! ~[i]Shaking my ass doing the happy dance! Gotta tone it down now because I’m at work![/i]~ You ROCK MTS!! :)
Oh man you scare the hell of me, I was in heartbreaking and crying so hard that see Tina will going to break up with Bette and feel sad and bad for both of them. But now Tina realize that she can’t live without Bette and she coming out to be with Bette and work thing out. You are a great teasing here and doing a good job to. Post soon, thank you! 5 stars for you!
thumbs up. you’re a good writer. keep going and thanks for your time.