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    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 15

    Story written on April 28, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53536
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    Tina finally makes a decision.
    (B&T Beginning Set on College Campus – SEQUEL to THE ROOMMATES)

    Tina Kennard was so engrossed in her thoughts that she didnt realize she was already crying, the tears snaking their way down her flushed cheeks. Walking into the fieldhouse, she followed the sounds of a familiar hip hop beat to the gym floor. After scanning the crowd for the love of her life, Tina saw Bette talking with Alice. Tina stared at her girlfriends dark brown and expected to find them angry and full of rage. She expected that at any moment, Bette would go lunging for Alice and be escorted out by security. What she hadnt expected was to see those dark brown pools filled with an immobilizing sadness. She hadnt expected to see Bettes defeated stance as the tall tan woman backed away from Alices touch.

    Tina looked on, unaware of the tears streaming down her face. Young bodies danced around her, several of the purple-shirted participants watching the despair on the sad blonde womans face. Tina was oblivious to their stares as doubt whispered softly in her ear.

    Look at her Tina. Is this what you really want? Do you really want this to be over? You cant even sleep without her next to you? How can you live your days without her in your life? Look at her eyes, Tina. This is killing her. Shes already giving up. Shes been giving everything to everyone and shes tired. Look at those eyes, Tina. Look at what youre doing to her. Can you live with that? Shed do anything for you. She loved you and cared for you when no one else was around. She loves every part of you. Every imperfection, every flaw. She knows all of your faces and loves you in spite of yourself. Can you walk away from this kind of love? Can you live with yourself if you do?,, she wondered.

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    BETTE

    Bette looked down into Alices eyes. You dont know what else to say? How about you tell me that this week has just been some horrific dream. How about you tell me that this is all some big joke and theres a hidden camera somewhere. How about you tell me you can turn back time and undo the set of events you triggered in my life. Can you do that, Al? Can you?, asked Bette.

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    9. Dear lord I’m going to have a stroke! OMG this was totally freaking amazing! You just made my entire day! WOO FREAKING HOO! I need to calm down now, I need to go listen to a song by Enya. More soon. Whew!

    15. WOW!!! That was Beautiful Awesome I’m really Happy and WOW! Thank you for not breaking them up Thank you Thank you WOW anyway It’s really good I’m really intense after I read OMG there belong to each other you really scared me I thought they gonna breaking up Please don’t MTS Thank you again for the Amazing Story.

    16. OMG!!! Loved it!So happy Tina didnt breal up with Bette you had me scared there.please post soon very soon!!hopoefully we’ll read about Tina and Bette getting their groove on LOL

    18. B&T!!!!!!!! I always knew Tina was smart!!! I am still worried about her parents. Hopefully they can have some fun and not think about parents for a long time!*wink* I think they deserve some sexual healing!

    19. I’m patiently awaiting the next chapter, when Bette introduces Tina to Damon’s mama!
      Oh boy!!!!
      I’m glad Alice got to see this with her own eyes!!!
      Thank you.
      P.S: Did Alice meet Tina before this? I don’t remember.

    20. OHH THANK YOU GOD!!!!!! That’s what I’m talking about, now all that’s left to unfold is the parent drama and any other wired and wonderful thing you can come up with. Great writing, this has to be my fav chapter!

    22. MTS, you remained true to form! Thanks!! Oh by the way, another descriptive for Bette could possibly be “golden brown” but I personally like the words you use for her.

    23. your storyis great i love it i cant wait till the next chapter comes out i have been waiting for tina to smartin up and now that she did i cant wait thanks

    24. I’m pretty sure this is exactly why you won an award. I thought we were heading for a major angst blowout and I was scared. You swept in at the last second and saved us! I love this story. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

    25. YAY!!!!!!!!! Ahhh you really had me going their, MTS!! You sure know how to make a girl cry! :D Thank you soooo much!!!! God I love your story!

      P.S. – Congrats on your award! I got so excited when I found out you won!!

    26. No words can describe how amazing this story is! I was glad you brought up the room problem. I have wondered from the begining what would happen if they broke up or even had a bad fight. Dorm rooms are so small!!:)

    27. MTS, i have only just had to oportunity to catch up on this awesome story of yours but i gotta tell ya…. it’s sooo good, it should be illegal….lol….Thankyou for not breaking them up:)~letting out the breath i was holding for the entire chapter almost ….phew~
      Congrats on the award too……..Very deserving..More soon please:)

    28. I am SO happy I don’t know what to do with myself!! I read your stroy hours ago but I was just TOO excited to sit down and comment. I had to go share the good news!!! I am a major fan and I was definitely begining to get nervous. After reading each chapter, I would have this nervous feeling in the pit of my stomache. And truth be told, as I read this chapter I was convinced that Tina was going to run. But then she stopped seeing and thinking with her head and began using her heart. Their trials have only just begun but it’s better to endure pain with someone you love and trust than to live a pain-free life alone. I love this story!!!

    29. OMG! You really had me going there for awhile. So glad Tina came around. Your chapters are amazing and yet they just keep getting better and better. Don’t know how you do it, but please continue!

    30. Every reader finds herself.The writer’s work is merely a kind of optical instrument that makes it possible for the reader to discern what, without this story, she would perhaps never have seen in herself. This is so true with your story!!!!

    32. Yes, Tina finally found the key to the closet. I’m looking forward to how you write the parents into Tina’s self-discovery, presuming they will be thrown in for some well positioned drama! Brilliant , as asways MTS. And just an aside, I’m at the front of the queue as one of your biggest fans. Thanks so much for writing.

    41. Whew I can breathe again! You had me believing Tina was going to wimp out on Bette. Thank goodness she came to her senses! Another fabulous chapter MTS!

    43. my brain is completely fried after getting through my finals… but this story was definately work the risk of losing more brain cells due to lack of sleep. You’ve done an amazing job with this story; the emotions are painfully real and the characters are so easy to relate to that they feel like they’re actually personal friends. Great job and please post more as soon as you can!

    44. OH THANK GOD! you had me so freaking worried i almost had a heart attack! you write so freaking well! my heart was constricting then i was happy, it was phenomenal!!! i can’t wait for you to continue!!!!!!!!

    45. CHEEEEE-HOOOOOO!!!!!!! Omg, I so love you right now!! You brought our girls back together…this chapter just so made my night!! You go TINA!! You tell the world that Bette Porter is your woman and yours alone! Thank you MTS…YOU ROCK!!

    46. mts i think you need to put a warning at the start of these intense chapters like: breathing apparatus recommended..read atyour own risk.loved it ,tina will feel so much better now and bette too.yeh!!

    47. Hey congrats on your award, I just love your story because it contains so much drama and of course it’s about Bette and Tinas beginning and who doesn’t love that anyway sorry I haven’t posted on your previous chapters, I just finished catching up. K is right you Rock!

    50. Oh man you scare the hell of me, I was in heartbreaking and crying so hard that see Tina will going to break up with Bette and feel sad and bad for both of them. But now Tina realize that she can’t live without Bette and she coming out to be with Bette and work thing out. You are a great teasing here and doing a good job to. Post soon, thank you! 5 stars for you!

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