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    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 27

    Story written on June 16, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
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    Tina “joins” the family.

     

    Grandma?, asked Bette as the group walked on.

     

    Yes, Sweetheart?, Deborah replied.

     

    Id like to stay with you tonight.if you dont mind.Tina and I., said Bette.

     

    Deborah Jennings stopped the motion of her short legs and smiled into her only grandchilds shining brown eyes. Oh, Id love it if you girls stayed with me. As long as its alright with your father.

     

    Melvin suddenly snapped back into reality and waved his hand, as if dismissing the need for approval. Thats fine by me. I think its a wonderful idea.

     

    Great. Sleepover at Moms., said Karen with a smile. Shed planned on spending the night with her mother anyway.

     

    When they came to their fork in the road where Melvin needed to part ways from the four women at his side, Deborah took him by the arm and smiled gently at him.

     

    Youve been a life saver, Melvin. Just like a son to me. I cant thank you enough for everything youve done for me and Bob., she said, pride radiating from her glowing blue eyes.

     

    Melvin smiled and patted the dainty hand on this arm. Youre still my family, Deborah. And youve been nothing but kind to me since the day we met. Now, Im going to head home and start making some phone calls to get some of the arrangements in order. Ill give you a call this evening and stop by tomorrow to help.

     

    Deborahs smile began to fade as if realizing she still had a funeral to plan. Yes, we will need to get the arrangements in order. I gather well go to the funeral home tomorrow and everything. Lets plan to start early.

     

    Very good, then., said Melvin, he bent down and quickly hugged his former mother-in-law before kissing her forehead lovingly. Ill call you tonight.

     

    He then embraced both Karen and Bette and smiled warmly at Tina before making his exit. Today there had been a lot of hugs, kisses, and gentle loving touches; a lot more than normal. Today, these touches, embraces, and displays of love and affection were sorely needed. The women made it to Karens blue Volvo and Bette and Tina again eyed the blue HRC bumper sticker, sharing a glance before sliding into the back seat. As they drove off, Bette wondered just what the deal was with her Aunt Karen and vowed to ask about it before the night was up.

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    4. Wow what a bittersweet chapter, MTS! I was feeling all warm and fuzzy with the family stuff and then BAM! You do a 180 and knock the wind right out of me!! Absolutely brilliant stuff, MTS. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

    5. WOW!! Unbelievable!! You’ve got me hanging on the edge of my seat MTS!! Lovin’ it! I love the long chapter! Please, please update soon…omg, I can’t wait to read the next installment;)

    6. “Hey, is that smell what I think it is?”
      “Yeah, it smells familiar…but I can’t quite place it.”
      “Oh, that’s drama. It’s on it’s way.”
      I can’t wait! Nice

    7. Today as I was looking for a new story to read.I came across your story and seem how many readers your story has.I have never seem a numbers with 8000 readers before.So last night i started at the beginning and read up till the this chapter.WOW!!This is a beautiful story and I will continue to read each and every chapter you write.

    13. thanks for letting us really inside the story. i like it a lot better when the stories are longer, because then you can really get the feel for it. great job, can’t wait for the next posting.

    16. WOWWWWYYY!!! Great Chapter! as hsss0310 said you have a way of really placing the reader inside your stories. It was a little after 1 when I started to read this and as I was reading the part where Karen yawns I yawned at the exact same time!

    18. Sorry that you have to go through the moving thing its one of those thing I never want to do again but if this story is the booby prize I’m so happy thanks for the story and all the extra pages it was great.

    23. You have a new fan here……I’ve printed out every one of your chapters and made my own “book”….so I can read anytime. You are awesome……

    27. You know us, the longer the better, although it is weird with the page thing, but I think we’re getting used to that. Love the story. Woo! Hope the move goes well and they don’t break anything. That’s fun. Looking forward to the next chapter!

    29. oh my goodness, what a cliff hanger. i love the interaction between the four women over the photographs, and the character of karen is very well written. i’m excited/interested to see how this all plays out with bette’s mom. thanks!

    30. K
      Wonderful chapter, love the family stuff. Sounds like it is really about to get interesting. I love the long chapter! Just LOVE this story, hope you post soon.

    36. MTS…I believe this may be your best chapter yet! You have completely drawn me in and made me feel a part of this story! Very rich and powerful writing! Giving us the family background has enriched your story and made an already amazing story simply superb! Thank you!

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