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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 27
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At around 8 that evening, Tina was learning more about Bettes life and past than she ever realized shed get to know. The four women were sitting around in the living room in their pajamas, sipping on hot cocoa and flipping through family photo albums as they laughed and talked and shared their memories of Robert Jennings. Photo albums lay open, scattered around the tan barberry carpet. Karen was sitting on the floral print couch with her mother, her sky-blue house coat and the white USC coffee mug at her lips making her the perfect picture of comfort and serenity.
With photos still in her hands and the smiling remnants of an earlier tale concerning the mischievous activities of Robert and Bette still present on her tanned face, Tina looked up adoringly at Deborah as the story of her lovers life continued to unfold. The caramel beauty stood and went to find coasters for her and Tinas mugs of cocoa before plopping back down on the carpet next to her girlfriend, placing the coasters on the coffee table in front of them.
Deborah was still wiping at the funny tears that had slipped from her warm blue eyes during the last humor-filled story as she spoke. Well, you know Melvin and Jan had a hard time conceiving Bette. She was nearly a test-tube baby.
Karen smiled and shook her head. Oh, I remember those days. They wanted so badly to have a child.
Deborah nodded and continued. They sure did. And when Jan finally got pregnant, she was so sick. She couldnt keep anything down. Bette was a handful right from the start.
Was I really?, asked Bette, smiling at the warmth of this conversation.
Yes you were. And then when you got here, you were so sensitive. Your mom wanted to breastfeed, but you wouldnt take, so you were on that expensive formula. And you were so allergic to those disposable diapers they finally had to put you in real ones. Ill never forget washing them out in the toilet., said Deborah.
Washing them out in the toilet?, asked Tina, her eyes wide with intrigue.
Oh yes. You had to wash them out in the toilet and then wait for the diaper service to come and collect them., said Deborah.
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(55 votes, average: 4.11 out of 5)
You never have a need to apologize for length. You write so well, this story is a joy to read.
I had a feeling that this was coming. I am so loving this! Can’t wait for more.
OH, this is awesome. Guess who’s coming to dinner?? YIKES.
Wow what a bittersweet chapter, MTS! I was feeling all warm and fuzzy with the family stuff and then BAM! You do a 180 and knock the wind right out of me!! Absolutely brilliant stuff, MTS. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
WOW!! Unbelievable!! You’ve got me hanging on the edge of my seat MTS!! Lovin’ it! I love the long chapter! Please, please update soon…omg, I can’t wait to read the next installment;)
“Hey, is that smell what I think it is?”
“Yeah, it smells familiar…but I can’t quite place it.”
“Oh, that’s drama. It’s on it’s way.”
I can’t wait! Nice
Today as I was looking for a new story to read.I came across your story and seem how many readers your story has.I have never seem a numbers with 8000 readers before.So last night i started at the beginning and read up till the this chapter.WOW!!This is a beautiful story and I will continue to read each and every chapter you write.
Please feel free to write a long chapter anytime. Love it. Can’t wait to see what drama, momma brings!!!
Good chapter. Damn this is awesome and now Bette’s mother is there standing in front of Bette. Post soon, thanks!
I’ve found myself coming back to check out your updates. I’ve come to love your story. Thanks for updating.
ARGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!SEE YOU ARE A TEASE. Now I get to tease you all I want. You have to post soon. I wont be able to sleep.
Great!
What drama will ‘Mom’ bring.
thanks for letting us really inside the story. i like it a lot better when the stories are longer, because then you can really get the feel for it. great job, can’t wait for the next posting.
Excellent.
I dig Aunt Karen. Great chapter – the description of Bette’s mom was great.
WOWWWWYYY!!! Great Chapter! as hsss0310 said you have a way of really placing the reader inside your stories. It was a little after 1 when I started to read this and as I was reading the part where Karen yawns I yawned at the exact same time!
a wonderfully long chapter
Sorry that you have to go through the moving thing its one of those thing I never want to do again but if this story is the booby prize I’m so happy thanks for the story and all the extra pages it was great.
MTS…loved this chapter… and they can never be too long….can’t wait to meet mom..please continue
Oh boy! Glad Bette has Tina and Auntie Karen for support.
I echo Seahurt’s and Jwet’s sentiments. And I add, in the words of Kyle Minogue “More More More!”
That was a nice, long, wonderfully written chapter. Excellent work, once again!
You have a new fan here……I’ve printed out every one of your chapters and made my own “book”….so I can read anytime. You are awesome……
Megga- Rutro. . .mom. I love this story and am so glad you’re back to posting. Please post again soon!
charming as always, thank you
AMAZING!!!
You know us, the longer the better, although it is weird with the page thing, but I think we’re getting used to that. Love the story. Woo! Hope the move goes well and they don’t break anything. That’s fun. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Great chapter, well worth the wait. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
oh my goodness, what a cliff hanger. i love the interaction between the four women over the photographs, and the character of karen is very well written. i’m excited/interested to see how this all plays out with bette’s mom. thanks!
K
Wonderful chapter, love the family stuff. Sounds like it is really about to get interesting. I love the long chapter! Just LOVE this story, hope you post soon.
fabulous:)
Damn i was waiting for this, and you couldnt do it any better, the whole Bette meeting her mom again was more than wonderful..
amazing as usual! Love the long chapter
Great story. Just love to keep us hanging
Thanks for taking the time to share this wonderful story with us…it has been one of my favorites from the start.
MTS…I believe this may be your best chapter yet! You have completely drawn me in and made me feel a part of this story! Very rich and powerful writing! Giving us the family background has enriched your story and made an already amazing story simply superb! Thank you!
Oh gosh, this is quite the cliffhanger you gave us. I’m sitting here waiting for you…
Uh-oh…..Mom’s back in town. Another brillant chapter MTS. This story rocks!! Best of luck wherever your move is takes you.