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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 27
There was something else shed always wanted to know about her girlfriend. Why did everyone start calling her Bette instead of Liz or Lizzie or something like that?
Deborah smiled broadly, Well dear, that was all me. Jan always liked the name
Im glad it did. I hate
The phone rang and Karen sprung up and disappeared into the kitchen to answer it. She returned moments later with the cordless phone and handed it to her mother. Its Melvin, she whispered.
Deborah nodded and answered, Hello Melvin.Im doing alrightWhat time do they open tomorrow?…….Okay..Lets shoot for 9 tomorrow then..Which papers?….Let me try and find them..Mmmhmmm.Bob had them all together. Deborah got up and started moving to the stairs towards her 2nd floor master bedroom in search of the paper work shed need to show the funeral home tomorrow. As her voice drifted away and became less and less audible, Tina studied the photos in her hand and Bette took a sip of her cocoa before walking around and plopping down on the couch beside Karen. It was killing her not to know the story behind her aunts HRC bumper sticker and the seemingly psychic way in which see appeared to understand Bettes need for Tina. With her grandmother out of the room, the dark-haired young woman saw this as her chance to get her questions answered.
She smiled sweetly at the woman beside her and said, So.Aunt Karen..whats new with you? On hearing this, Tina looked up from the photos, her eyes ping-ponging back and forth between Karen and Bette.
Karen smiled curiously at her niece and replied, Ummmm, nothing much. How about you?
Nothing much is really new. Seems youve already been clued in to most things. Daddy told you about Damon.
Youve met Tina. I have some other really good friends at school.Dana and
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(55 votes, average: 4.11 out of 5)
You never have a need to apologize for length. You write so well, this story is a joy to read.
I had a feeling that this was coming. I am so loving this! Can’t wait for more.
OH, this is awesome. Guess who’s coming to dinner?? YIKES.
Wow what a bittersweet chapter, MTS! I was feeling all warm and fuzzy with the family stuff and then BAM! You do a 180 and knock the wind right out of me!! Absolutely brilliant stuff, MTS. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
WOW!! Unbelievable!! You’ve got me hanging on the edge of my seat MTS!! Lovin’ it! I love the long chapter! Please, please update soon…omg, I can’t wait to read the next installment;)
“Hey, is that smell what I think it is?”
“Yeah, it smells familiar…but I can’t quite place it.”
“Oh, that’s drama. It’s on it’s way.”
I can’t wait! Nice
Today as I was looking for a new story to read.I came across your story and seem how many readers your story has.I have never seem a numbers with 8000 readers before.So last night i started at the beginning and read up till the this chapter.WOW!!This is a beautiful story and I will continue to read each and every chapter you write.
Please feel free to write a long chapter anytime. Love it. Can’t wait to see what drama, momma brings!!!
Good chapter. Damn this is awesome and now Bette’s mother is there standing in front of Bette. Post soon, thanks!
I’ve found myself coming back to check out your updates. I’ve come to love your story. Thanks for updating.
ARGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!SEE YOU ARE A TEASE. Now I get to tease you all I want. You have to post soon. I wont be able to sleep.
Great!
What drama will ‘Mom’ bring.
thanks for letting us really inside the story. i like it a lot better when the stories are longer, because then you can really get the feel for it. great job, can’t wait for the next posting.
Excellent.
I dig Aunt Karen. Great chapter – the description of Bette’s mom was great.
WOWWWWYYY!!! Great Chapter! as hsss0310 said you have a way of really placing the reader inside your stories. It was a little after 1 when I started to read this and as I was reading the part where Karen yawns I yawned at the exact same time!
a wonderfully long chapter
Sorry that you have to go through the moving thing its one of those thing I never want to do again but if this story is the booby prize I’m so happy thanks for the story and all the extra pages it was great.
MTS…loved this chapter… and they can never be too long….can’t wait to meet mom..please continue
Oh boy! Glad Bette has Tina and Auntie Karen for support.
I echo Seahurt’s and Jwet’s sentiments. And I add, in the words of Kyle Minogue “More More More!”
That was a nice, long, wonderfully written chapter. Excellent work, once again!
You have a new fan here……I’ve printed out every one of your chapters and made my own “book”….so I can read anytime. You are awesome……
Megga- Rutro. . .mom. I love this story and am so glad you’re back to posting. Please post again soon!
charming as always, thank you
AMAZING!!!
You know us, the longer the better, although it is weird with the page thing, but I think we’re getting used to that. Love the story. Woo! Hope the move goes well and they don’t break anything. That’s fun. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Great chapter, well worth the wait. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
oh my goodness, what a cliff hanger. i love the interaction between the four women over the photographs, and the character of karen is very well written. i’m excited/interested to see how this all plays out with bette’s mom. thanks!
K
Wonderful chapter, love the family stuff. Sounds like it is really about to get interesting. I love the long chapter! Just LOVE this story, hope you post soon.
fabulous:)
Damn i was waiting for this, and you couldnt do it any better, the whole Bette meeting her mom again was more than wonderful..
amazing as usual! Love the long chapter
Great story. Just love to keep us hanging
Thanks for taking the time to share this wonderful story with us…it has been one of my favorites from the start.
MTS…I believe this may be your best chapter yet! You have completely drawn me in and made me feel a part of this story! Very rich and powerful writing! Giving us the family background has enriched your story and made an already amazing story simply superb! Thank you!
Oh gosh, this is quite the cliffhanger you gave us. I’m sitting here waiting for you…
Uh-oh…..Mom’s back in town. Another brillant chapter MTS. This story rocks!! Best of luck wherever your move is takes you.