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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 34
Are you here for the memorial reception?, asked Tina.
The bashful Latina shifted nervously, sticking her hands into the pockets of her tan linen pant suit. Uh.kind of. Is Karen here?
Oh yeah, shes out back. Come on in. Everyone is out in the backyard.
Id kinda like to speak with her in private. Do you think you could get her for me?, asked the woman.
Sure. Yeah. And your name again?, asked Tina.
The woman held a hand to her forehead and replied, Oh, Im sorry. Im Natalie. Im a friend of Karens
Tina nodded in understanding and headed off to find Karen.
Just as she departed, Bette made her appearance; wearing Tinas backpack and having carried her girlfriends rolling upright down the stairs.
Youre Natalie., said Bette.
Yeah, I guess I am. Is that a bad thing?
Oh no. I just heard a little about you. Why dont you come in and have a seat? You dont have to stand outside on the porch., said Bette.
Natalie stepped into the foyer and said Thank you.
Ive gotta go get some more bags. But, please make yourself comfortable in the living room. Can I get you anything?
Oh no. Thank you. I dont need anything., said Natalie.
Okay. Well let me know if you do.
Bette flashed a smile before bounding up the stairs.
Natalie was walking toward the livingroom sofa and stopped dead in her tracks when her gray eyes met Karens red-rimmed, sapphire pools.
Natalie. What are you doing here?, asked Karen.
Tina slid around the two women and walked back out the foyer, watching Karen and Natalie from a distance.
They stood about three feet apart; each woman craving the other but neither with the courage to move any closer, fear freezing them in place.
Natalie smiled weakly and her eyes watered. Did you think I could let this day pass without seeing you?
I thought we agreed that we needed some time apart., said Karen.
We did agree, Kay. But, this is different. I thought you might need a friend.
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btownjuli says
MTS…the waiting is killing me! Post soon!
mstx says
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Wonderful as always. They are just so sweet. Love it so much.
smile12345 says
Uh oh…I’m kinda scared now. I hope Bette’s father doesn’t catch them or find out. As usual, great chapter! I’m glad that you’ve been posting often. Yay! :)
ChakaSB says
Thank you for posting – great chapter. The part about Aunt Karen was touching, a good mirror for Tina and Bette. I was craving something good to read and there you were ;).
mclaerin says
i certainly wish for time to spring forward so i can read the next chapter *winks* good writing
mmarchione says
Megga- PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON! I love this story!
maybe says
If you are not a professional writer you should be. Thanks for the great storyline I have just recently caught up with/got caught up in.
tylo says
sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!
lovely1 says
LOVELY WUZ HERE 7/18/05
TiBetteShipper says
Thanks for the update, MTS! I like Natalie. I hope she and Karen work out. You “in” me sounds excellent. ;)
downlow95 says
Another moving and well done chapter. Yeah, the anticipation is killing me :-)
Z says
this story just flows so well. I am certain it is because it is so beautifully written. Excellent job and thank you for continuing.
JBlover4life says
They definately need some alone time, I just hope Melvin doesn’t intrude. Can’t wait for the next update!
Sox1 says
Although I have read every word of your stories, often late into the night I have never commented. Now that I realize how important the comments are when writing in a bit of a vacuum I will not continue that practive. I love this story. It is fresh, and energetic and the setting makes them so youg and innocent..their whole lives ahead of them and possible with eachother.
Can’t wait for a little B&T lovin unleass of course Melving catches you which I think might be where we are going. Oh the drama!!!
marsupial says
GREAT JOB…JUST SEATING PATIENTLY WAITING…PLEASE POST REAL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON…THANKS…
truBlue says
A day without your story is a waste of time……
robbeedee says
MTS,
Brilliant yet again. You always put a great big grin on my face just by posting a new chapter so imagine my delight when it is as superb as this.
Please keep up the excellent work and give us this insight into Bette and Tina and their relationship.
Your Loyal Fan.
t-boz says
This is a wonderful story. I look for it everytime I turn on my computer. Please post more soon. Thank you.
nzgrl says
I hope they keep it in the bedroom incase Melvin comes home early.
special_ed1845 says
You know would be funny …if Bette’s dad was at home…because he had a change of plans. : D
moonshadow says
Hey! I just got all caught up and as I expected everything was just perfect! I hope they’ll finally get a chance to de-compress and just be together without interuption. It’ll be interesting though, to see how things work out between Bette and her mom. I was wondering if Bette would begin to realize that by not being completely honest with Janice about her relationship w/Tina she, too, is not being truthful…then maybe she’ll be able to understand and forgive her mother’s actions. Often it’s easy to overlook our own faults and fears when our focus is on everyone else’s screw-ups. Thank you!!!
AmandaMG says
love this MTS… just hope the melvin doesn’t spoil any thing…
albeez says
what a way to end my sunday. this story is so great. i love the evolution of their relaitonship. i enjoyed how you had karen in there. something for them to learn. great as usual. can’t wait for the next one, soon please.
vatasha27 says
do they both go to yale?
country girl says
3 posts from MTS in 4 days? Did I die and go to heaven? =) Excellent chapter!! Thanks for continuing to write this awesome story!
momo says
Hey MTS Bring it on LOL! Whoa! I love it Thanks that was so Lovely Please post soon.
hss0310 says
I just came back from vacation…what a better way to start work than catching up on your story. I love it…as always!
trecelovinit says
Ok, I’m a little anxious here!! Although, it’s good Bette and Tina will have some “alone” time, but I’m nervous that Melvin’s going to come home from golf sooner than Bette’s thinking!!!
ut says
Good chapter. This is crazy for Bette and she really a break and now let see some love coming next for the 2 of them. Post soon, thanks!