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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 34
You think Id leave you behind, T?
What am I supposed to think?
Bette sighed and nodded in the direction of Tinas packed suitcase and backpack resting against the wall.
I already packed your things, T. I would never leave you behind.
Tina glanced over at her luggage and replied, Well, how was I supposed to know you were really leaving?
Tina.I called your cell phone. You didnt answer so I left a message.
The look in Tinas eyes said she didnt believe her lovers words. You left a message?, she asked, pulling her phone out of her purse and seeing Bettes missed call.
Oh. You left a message., said Tina.
Bette continued on with her packing frenzy.
I told you I did. Did you really think Id leave you?
Tina sighed deeply, I didnt know what to think. You just took off in such a hurry.
I was upset, Tina. Im just tired of all the drama around here. I need a ***** break., said Bette.
I know you do. Im sorry, babe.
Bette looked up and smiled softly before zipping her suitcase. You dont have to be sorry, T. Thank you for being with me. I know I blew up back there. I hope you didnt think it had anything to do with you.
I know it didnt.
Bette nodded and continued to gather the rest of her things.
The doorbell rang and the lovers looked curiously at each other.
Maybe its our cab., said Bette.
You called a cab?
Yeah.
Wow, you are really serious about this arent you?, asked Tina.
I told you I was.
Bette looked around at their luggage and said, If you go talk to the cab driver, Ill start bringing our things down.
Okay., said Tina, before dashing out the door and down the front steps.
When she opened the door and didnt find a cab waiting on the street or a cab driver at the door, Tina stood still, staring into a pair of sad, gray eyes. The woman before her was a short Latina with long, dark hair that fell past her shoulders, slight curls in the wisps that hung around her narrow face. As the pair of shy, gray eyes moved away from Tinas curious gaze, the womans timidity became all the more apparent.
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(59 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
MTS…the waiting is killing me! Post soon!
K
Wonderful as always. They are just so sweet. Love it so much.
Uh oh…I’m kinda scared now. I hope Bette’s father doesn’t catch them or find out. As usual, great chapter! I’m glad that you’ve been posting often. Yay! :)
Thank you for posting – great chapter. The part about Aunt Karen was touching, a good mirror for Tina and Bette. I was craving something good to read and there you were ;).
i certainly wish for time to spring forward so i can read the next chapter *winks* good writing
Megga- PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON! I love this story!
If you are not a professional writer you should be. Thanks for the great storyline I have just recently caught up with/got caught up in.
sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVELY WUZ HERE 7/18/05
Thanks for the update, MTS! I like Natalie. I hope she and Karen work out. You “in” me sounds excellent. ;)
Another moving and well done chapter. Yeah, the anticipation is killing me :-)
this story just flows so well. I am certain it is because it is so beautifully written. Excellent job and thank you for continuing.
They definately need some alone time, I just hope Melvin doesn’t intrude. Can’t wait for the next update!
Although I have read every word of your stories, often late into the night I have never commented. Now that I realize how important the comments are when writing in a bit of a vacuum I will not continue that practive. I love this story. It is fresh, and energetic and the setting makes them so youg and innocent..their whole lives ahead of them and possible with eachother.
Can’t wait for a little B&T lovin unleass of course Melving catches you which I think might be where we are going. Oh the drama!!!
GREAT JOB…JUST SEATING PATIENTLY WAITING…PLEASE POST REAL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON…THANKS…
A day without your story is a waste of time……
MTS,
Brilliant yet again. You always put a great big grin on my face just by posting a new chapter so imagine my delight when it is as superb as this.
Please keep up the excellent work and give us this insight into Bette and Tina and their relationship.
Your Loyal Fan.
This is a wonderful story. I look for it everytime I turn on my computer. Please post more soon. Thank you.
I hope they keep it in the bedroom incase Melvin comes home early.
You know would be funny …if Bette’s dad was at home…because he had a change of plans. : D
Hey! I just got all caught up and as I expected everything was just perfect! I hope they’ll finally get a chance to de-compress and just be together without interuption. It’ll be interesting though, to see how things work out between Bette and her mom. I was wondering if Bette would begin to realize that by not being completely honest with Janice about her relationship w/Tina she, too, is not being truthful…then maybe she’ll be able to understand and forgive her mother’s actions. Often it’s easy to overlook our own faults and fears when our focus is on everyone else’s screw-ups. Thank you!!!
love this MTS… just hope the melvin doesn’t spoil any thing…
what a way to end my sunday. this story is so great. i love the evolution of their relaitonship. i enjoyed how you had karen in there. something for them to learn. great as usual. can’t wait for the next one, soon please.
do they both go to yale?
3 posts from MTS in 4 days? Did I die and go to heaven? =) Excellent chapter!! Thanks for continuing to write this awesome story!
Hey MTS Bring it on LOL! Whoa! I love it Thanks that was so Lovely Please post soon.
I just came back from vacation…what a better way to start work than catching up on your story. I love it…as always!
Ok, I’m a little anxious here!! Although, it’s good Bette and Tina will have some “alone” time, but I’m nervous that Melvin’s going to come home from golf sooner than Bette’s thinking!!!
Good chapter. This is crazy for Bette and she really a break and now let see some love coming next for the 2 of them. Post soon, thanks!