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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 34
The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 34
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
Do you have a girlfriend?, asked Bette.
I did. We are going through some things right now so we really arent together., said Karen, a flash of hurt flickering in her soft blue eyes.
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Janice rolled her eyes at her own failings and threw up her hands. I have to ask someone else how to handle my own daughter. What the ***** have I done with my life?
Dont think of it like that. Bettes my best friend. We just reallyunderstand each other is all. Just give it some time. She really wants you around and in her life. Shes just hurt and still angry right now.
Janice smiled weakly, I hope youre right. Youre wise beyond your years, Tina.
Tina smiled in return, Well, I think Im gonna go find Bette.
Janice nodded. Yeah, thats a good idea. Thank you for taking care of my little girl. With all the ***** weve put her through, she needs a friend like you.
Tina just smiled again before heading off to find her soul mate.
As she departed, Janice watched her blond hair bounce in the sunshine her eyes focused on Tinas red blouse. Janice wondered just how things had changed so dramatically in only a few moments and found that the solution to mending this fractured relationship was beyond that which her mind could comprehend.
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When Tina finally located her girlfriend, Bette was in the guest room, moving at warp-speed, throwing her belongings into her rolling upright as quickly as she could.
Bette? What are you doing?, she asked.
Bette didnt even look up as answered, her curls flying as she moved. Im packing.
Now Tina was getting upset. Bette had totally run out on her and was in the midst of making a speedy getaway.
With a hand planted angrily on her right hip, her brow knitted she spat out, What the *****, Bette? You were just gonna leave me behind?
Still holding on to the shirt in her hand, Bette looked up into her girlfriends eyes and stared at her in disbelief.
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(59 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
MTS…the waiting is killing me! Post soon!
K
Wonderful as always. They are just so sweet. Love it so much.
Uh oh…I’m kinda scared now. I hope Bette’s father doesn’t catch them or find out. As usual, great chapter! I’m glad that you’ve been posting often. Yay! :)
Thank you for posting – great chapter. The part about Aunt Karen was touching, a good mirror for Tina and Bette. I was craving something good to read and there you were ;).
i certainly wish for time to spring forward so i can read the next chapter *winks* good writing
Megga- PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON! I love this story!
If you are not a professional writer you should be. Thanks for the great storyline I have just recently caught up with/got caught up in.
sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVELY WUZ HERE 7/18/05
Thanks for the update, MTS! I like Natalie. I hope she and Karen work out. You “in” me sounds excellent. ;)
Another moving and well done chapter. Yeah, the anticipation is killing me :-)
this story just flows so well. I am certain it is because it is so beautifully written. Excellent job and thank you for continuing.
They definately need some alone time, I just hope Melvin doesn’t intrude. Can’t wait for the next update!
Although I have read every word of your stories, often late into the night I have never commented. Now that I realize how important the comments are when writing in a bit of a vacuum I will not continue that practive. I love this story. It is fresh, and energetic and the setting makes them so youg and innocent..their whole lives ahead of them and possible with eachother.
Can’t wait for a little B&T lovin unleass of course Melving catches you which I think might be where we are going. Oh the drama!!!
GREAT JOB…JUST SEATING PATIENTLY WAITING…PLEASE POST REAL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON…THANKS…
A day without your story is a waste of time……
MTS,
Brilliant yet again. You always put a great big grin on my face just by posting a new chapter so imagine my delight when it is as superb as this.
Please keep up the excellent work and give us this insight into Bette and Tina and their relationship.
Your Loyal Fan.
This is a wonderful story. I look for it everytime I turn on my computer. Please post more soon. Thank you.
I hope they keep it in the bedroom incase Melvin comes home early.
You know would be funny …if Bette’s dad was at home…because he had a change of plans. : D
Hey! I just got all caught up and as I expected everything was just perfect! I hope they’ll finally get a chance to de-compress and just be together without interuption. It’ll be interesting though, to see how things work out between Bette and her mom. I was wondering if Bette would begin to realize that by not being completely honest with Janice about her relationship w/Tina she, too, is not being truthful…then maybe she’ll be able to understand and forgive her mother’s actions. Often it’s easy to overlook our own faults and fears when our focus is on everyone else’s screw-ups. Thank you!!!
love this MTS… just hope the melvin doesn’t spoil any thing…
what a way to end my sunday. this story is so great. i love the evolution of their relaitonship. i enjoyed how you had karen in there. something for them to learn. great as usual. can’t wait for the next one, soon please.
do they both go to yale?
3 posts from MTS in 4 days? Did I die and go to heaven? =) Excellent chapter!! Thanks for continuing to write this awesome story!
Hey MTS Bring it on LOL! Whoa! I love it Thanks that was so Lovely Please post soon.
I just came back from vacation…what a better way to start work than catching up on your story. I love it…as always!
Ok, I’m a little anxious here!! Although, it’s good Bette and Tina will have some “alone” time, but I’m nervous that Melvin’s going to come home from golf sooner than Bette’s thinking!!!
Good chapter. This is crazy for Bette and she really a break and now let see some love coming next for the 2 of them. Post soon, thanks!