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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 35
Mmmm.Im close. Im so close.
T.I have to taste you.
Mmmm. Ahhhhh.
Oh my God.
Bette.Bette.Oh *****.
Bette slid out of her lovers core and Tina turned her head to the side, asking What are you doing?, her heart pounding, her chest heaving, her hands still planted against the dresser and her ***** still hanging in the air, her center awaiting Bettes return.
Bette pulled Tina closer to her, pressing her ***** against her lovers back, massaging both of Tinas ***** with her hands, unable to stop the gentle grinding her center was doing against her girlfriends rounded cheeks.
T.baby I need you to get on the bed. I need to taste you.
Mmmm., Tina moaned, her head leaned back, enjoying the feel of her girlfriends mouth against her neck and the pleasurable kneading of her *****.
Bette planted a few more kisses before licking her way to Tinas earlobe and whispering, Come on baby. Come lay down for me.
Okay.
Bette laid her girlfriend down on top of the white comforter before crawling on top of her, holding herself up with her hands and leaning down to kiss her lovers lips. They shared passionate kisses and Tinas hands wrapped around dark, curly tresses, holding Bettes mouth against hers as they shared one spirit.
Bette kissed her lover one more time before moving her lips to Tinas ear.
Let me taste you, T
She kissed her way down Tinas body, paying special attention to the darkened nipples that stood erect, begging to be tasted. Bette obliged these hardened nubs, her stomach resting on her lovers center.
Tina moved her hips upwards, the pounding between her legs had swelled to a deafening roar, blocking out all other senses. She needed the sweet, titillating ecstasy that only a climactic release could bring.
Bette moved further down, inhaling her girlfriends scent before kissing the inside of Tinas thighs, her tongue sliding along the smooth skin, tasting the honey that found itself there. She used her fingers to separate her lovers lips and blew gently onto the glistening jewel, licking her lips before lowering her mouth down around her girlfriends *****.
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Christy says
I think I will go to bed now. Thanks for the late update tonight. This is still a great story.
Jackiee1 says
Let it be Karen
trecelovinit says
Wow!!! Did we get a treat for tonight or what!!!! I hope that was Karen that saw them and not Bette’s mom!!! Thanks for the late update, MTS!!!
squib says
OMG…i bet it’s bette’s mom! dont let it be the her dad! oh god
ChakaSB says
Back to back! what an amazing treat. And it was so good I need a smoke (and I don’t even smoke) ;)
Ahh.. the mystery women who perhaps watched (yikes). My guess is it was mom..
AmandaMG says
MTS… i love your story… my guess its the girl friend… lets just hope she doesn’t run and tell the melvin… another great ch…please continue
downlow95 says
Brilliant! A wonderful climax from a beautiful buildup! I can’t wait to see who saw them. Perfect chapter!
techgal says
Well, it couldn’t be grandma, because they would’ve heard her body drop on the floor froma heat attack!
Mom is probably at the door, taking notes.
Thanks for giving us and Bette and Tina some needed relief!
melanie... says
quel talent! j’aime ton histoire et j’adore ta façon d’ecire… MERCI MERCI MERCI
Sox1 says
Ok…that was intense, beautiful and dare I say hot. I am really enjoying this story. It is fun to have a young love when B&T are young as well just starting out.
So who saw them. It said woman, so not melving. Not my Mom, so Bette’s Mom? Don’t leave us hanging. I tell you your intimate scenes have me right there. I almost feel like I am standing in the room invading their privacy. I want to look away, but I just can/t :)
rosie says
My word, you did live up to your name is this one, didn’t you. Great chapter. Hot too.
claire mcquade says
OMG… i think it was Bette`s mom. Great update :)
nzgrl says
I have a second guess, the Maid Juanita! or something like that :-)
peaches says
You are a terrific storyteller. Thanks.
Fa6Fa6 says
THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME..
UURRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHH gotta tell u, i hate cliffhangers..
I hope it’s momma.. i wanted Bette to come out to her mom from the 1st time her mom showed up..
Great as usual..
Down Low says
Forget who is at the door, what about what just happened in that bed. Gosh, that was emotional and intimate. You continue to deliver high quality tales that keep us entertained.
phantomframe says
I think it’s one of TINA’S family members–her sister, maybe–Melvin sent word to her folks that Tina was in SD, so her sis showed up. Hee!
Okay…I hope it’s Karen!
s says
oh boy… let’s hope that it’s Karen eh? If not, then I guess I’ll be prepared for rough patches ahead. Thanks MTS for your post. Loved it… waiting for the next one.
rebelzz says
uh, definitely is mum. haha shake up things.
t-boz says
Oh dang, that last sentence woke me up! I was just winding down, from their sexual connecting, and the ‘The woman who’d accidently caught them making love attemped to make her exit, shaking her head against the images she’d see as she stood glued to the floor in front of a bedroom door that had never been closed.’ Karen? Hmmm, I don’t know, I’m guessing it was Bette’s mom, I hope it wasn’t her grandmother. Whoever it was, it was nice of them not to interrupt the lovebirds. That she just walked away, is a good thing, right. I mean, she could have just burst in there, and confronted the young lovers. Oh, well, whomever it was, I hope they don’t freak. Next post, please.
shades says
Wow, MTS! As I’ve said before, your writing is utterly amazing. I just love this story. Can’t wait to see who the little voyeur was. Please don’t leave us hanging too long!
marsupial says
GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS..AWAITING THE NEXT CHAPTER…THANKS…..
margot says
heart. pounding. whoa. i hope i find love like that, right? and who was that woman.. bette’s mom, is my guess, although vivian is a viable option too… good chapter, thanks!
Bronwyn says
OMG a cliffhanger! ;) Argh I need to know who it iiiissss! I hope for their sake it’s Karen…but that would just be to easy, wouldn’t it?
good job, yet again!
hss0310 says
I totally agree with Tina Kennard! You deserve many more fan fiction awards. You’re an awesome writer! What’s with the craziness?
truBlue says
My guess is that it’s Vivian too. If it were Janice, how’d she get into the house, and she would’ve barged in and not back off.
Love your work. Thanks.
jade23 says
so intense, so beautiful.. I crave the connection they have in my own life.. I’m with others, think it’s Vivian. wow! can’t wait for the next chapter!!
mango says
Oh MTS, you dog, you!!!!!!!
I hope you are in a writing mood today and post again…..pleeeeeez?!
sweetpea says
Oh boy that was hot. I too think it was Vivian. Great update .. please post soon.
mclaerin says
Please let it be Karen…I’d die if it was Bette’s mom !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don’t keep us in suspense!!! *evil grin* GREAT CHAPTER
girl drummer says
OMG, very sexy chapter. I wonder who was watching, I also hope it was her aunt. Post soon.
Barrie says
Great chappy! I know who it is…Melvin’s woman!
baileymom says
Wow!!! what a chapter. First, what an intense session for them and what a treat for us readers! Secondly, not sure if this is the right place to say this but, i just gotta say u write brilliantly! Your imagination and your descriptions of things are so beautiful! I hope u write a novel, one day, I will be an avid reader! Keep it up!
Brooke says
Awsome chapter.
Change says
WOW!! DANG MTS!! LoL…whew…HOT!! I’m so way behind on my readings due to the fact that I’m out of the country right now…family vacation…I’m actually in the Philippines at the moment in a local internet cafe so I thought I’d just read your most recent piece…and you didn’t let me down at all *winkwink* Thanks, now I can enjoy the rest of my night…AWESOME MTS!!
moonshadow says
Ooh, I’m with Sea.,my bet is on Vivian, Melvin’s girlfriend, but whoever it was sure got an eyefull (and earfull!) Woo! Thanks
KidRookie says
Holy crap! That whole chapter was amazing, but that last paragraph floored me, great writing!!!
kmose says
From a silent reader (every last chapter), thanks for continuing to tell a great story!
Tina Kennard says
Damn you! but in a good way :) My girlfriend just went back to California today and this chapter isn’t making me feel any better lol… But this was a HOT chapter thats why your an award winner :o) Hey you can’t keep a girl hanging for long please post soon I’m lovin’ the fact that your posting more than normal keep it up if you can :o) and as far as the foot steps…I hope that was mom I’d love to see that drama!!
JBlover4life says
WOW!!! That was hot!! I think it’s Vivian, which means she’ll tell Melvin and all hell will break loose. Either way bring on the next chapter! Can’t wait to see what happens next
albeez says
well that was quite the visual before going to bed. thanks for that. really love this story. hope it was karen, but think its mel or momma. post again soon.
momo says
MTS That was so Beautiful Amazing WHOA! LOL! I’m so spittle to read this Story LOL! WOW! MTS GREAT I Love it Please post soon and Thank you.
mstx says
K
Wonderful as always. Can’t get enough of your story! I love this so much!
mmarchione says
Megga- OH SHIT! THEY FORGOT TO CLOSE THE DOOR?!? Wow, what a HOT chapter! Well, at least (Bette’s mom I’m guessing) saw how they love eachother, and not just like a horney make-out session. Please post again soon MTS, I love this story!
TiBetteShipper says
That was so beautiful, MTS. I love how in tune they are with each other. I hope they’ll be able to trust whoever their audience was.
tibette99 says
grsat chapter…looking forward to the next one.
I’m guessing that it was Vivian. I really can’t see Janice barging in Melvin’s house. And it seemed like the person was ‘upset’ with what she saw, trying the shake the images from her head. So i don’t think i’d be Karen in that case
rebakathy says
Weeeeeeeeeeeee! That was great MTS. I know who it is, unless you changed your mind, which is the writers perogative after all:P More!
Seahurst says
They are at Bette’s dad’s right? So, maybe the woman is Vivian…the woman Melvin has been with for years. Still loving this story…every single chapter. Thanks!!
OCD says
Oh good god. I’m with Christy. I think I’ll go to bed now on my way to run my head under a cold shower. DANG MTS. That so rocks still. I have loved this story since the first chapter. Totally Awesome. Sweet dreams :)
nzgrl says
That was Hot!
It’s either Karen, Vivian, Janice or Grandma. My money is on Grandma ha!
special_ed1845 says
Maybe Christy didn’t get the memo of what just transpired.LMAO
BUT OMG…I think it’s Vivian…but it will be more dramatic and entertaining if it’s Bette’s mom. However if Bette finds out that Vivian knows and attacks her that would be just as entertaining. If the woman is Karen..which I highly doubt since she shook her head….then that would suck because she already knows. BTW…this is YOUR WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER. To end this chapter with that cliffy is just heartless , cruel and yet entertaining.lol
PLEASE POST SOON OR I’LL DIE.
and what craziness?
domenica says
Your chapters are always worth the wait. I love all your stories and this has become me all time favorite.(who could the woman be?)
ut says
Oh my fuck, who the hell is watching them, Bette’s mom or Karen or maybe Bette’s grandma. What a hot love scene and can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks! Good chapter!