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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 38
“Wow. I’m certainly impressed.”, said Kit.
“So am I. You have a real talent, Kit.”, said Deborah.
“Thank you.”
“She’s right. You really do.”, said Janice.
“Thanks a lot. You don’t know how much that means to me.”, said Kit as she rose up.
Bette grinned at this and saw the Melvin-induced sadness in Kit’s eyes begin to fade.
“Well, we do need to get going. Kit still has to drive back.”, said Bette.
Deborah’s smile fell at hearing these words and she said, “Yeah, I suppose so. I’m going to miss having you girls around.”
“Don’t worry, Grandma. I’ll make sure I come back more often and I’ll call you when I can. Tina’s my roommate so you can even talk to her if you want.”, said Bette.
Deborah smiled again. “Oh, that’s good. I will be looking forward to it. And Tina, it was such a pleasure to meet you. You’re a lovely girl. You’re like family now. You come back anytime you want, okay?”
Tina smiled. “Okay. Thank you. It was really great to meet all of you. Thanks for making me feel so at home.”
“You’re such an angel, it was no trouble at all.”, said Deborah.
“It’s too bad we missed Aunt Karen.”, said Bette.
“Yeah, she’s going to be so disappointed that she missed you guys. She was going over to her friend, Natalie’s for a little while.”, said Janice.
Tina and Bette shared a look as the women all began their round of farewell wishes and goodbye hugs. Before long, Kit, Bette, and Tina were heading toward Kit’s silver BMW. Bette climbed into the passenger seat and Tina got comfortable in the back. Kit pulled out her CD case and handed it to Bette.
“Well ladies, pick out some music to keep this ride interesting. Tina, what kind of music do you like?”, asked Kit.
Tina smiled and leaned up, resting her arms on the back of either seat, her head popping up between the Porter women. “I uh.I really like that ‘Love Come Down’ song. Do you have any N2Soul?”
Kit chuckled. “Girl, you really know the way to my heart. Bette, this girl is a keeper.”
Bette smiled, “I know she is.”
Kit started the engine and Bette found her sister’s last CD. The three of them waved to Deborah and Janice as the cars slowly pulled away from the curb and in moments, Bette’s mother and grandmother were miniatures in the rear view mirror.
TBC (To Be Continued)
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(46 votes, average: 4.11 out of 5)
brb
Aunt Karen is gettin her grove on. LOL!!!!
powerful. i have a melvin. what in the name of god does he think hes doing. the pain that is given, the insecurities sometimes seem insurmountable from someone like this. this was very real. loved the bonding momenys and the janice part. i think shes trying. thanks this was great.
It’s always a pleasure reading another wonderful chapter of this story!
MTS… love your story… but you know that… to bad we didn’t see aunt karen again… maybe she could visit them at school
Great chapter!! How do you do it, you write so well! I hope you can continue to smile, because you’ve seriously got GREAT talent. :D
That was great. I think if I was Kit me and Melvin would have been rolling around on the floor. I almost choaked him through the screen. Damn. Im sureyou have drama in the fuure so this was a nice way to end their visit. I hope Bette and her mother are able to form some type of a realtionship.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Two cools points for the special. Excellent chapter.
Oh boy…Aunt Karen is back in full effect. YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Always great to see an update from you. Melvin is such an ass. I feel bad for Kit. Glad Bette is being supportive. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Extra smiles just for you!!!
Thank you for another wonderful chapter! Sorry your life is a little hectic/stressful. Your stories ease the stress in mine. :=D
Melvin is an ass:::
Great to have you back. Wonderful update. Just love how things are coming together, well at least where the women in the family are concerned. Melvin, is another story.
Aunt Karen’s preoccupied,huh!!!
Melvin is a ass!!!!!!! nice up date
MELVIN IS SO UPTIGHT…MTS GREAT JOB..THANKS
hi i love the stories but one quick question are you single or taken at this point in your life i want to know where the deepness is coming from
So very glad to have you back. What a jerk Melvin is…at least now both B&T got to see how he reacted to Kit being pregnant…..he would totally flip if he found out the truth about B&T’s loving relationship.
YOu know, you are always the first one I check to see updates from. When I find one, I know that I will have a great day.
Great chapter, MTS! I’m glad Bette was able to feel her mother’s love again, even for just a little bit. Can’t wait to see what school has in store for our girls. Thanks!
:)))))) that’s how I look when I see your update. Have a great day!!! :)
Hey MTS great chapter. Too bad Aunt Karen was absent. B&T are wonderful.
Go aunt Karen! Yeah… Tina’s a keeper since the start! Ugh, Melvin – what goes around comes around. If you think that your daughter’s life a mess, then you might want to look at yourself and see what’s causing it.
Great chapter and great song. If it’s the song i’m thinking of, i used to play it all the time. Take care of our girls, i’ve really grown attached to them. Was it Tina Marie??
K
Great chapter. Still love this so much. Glad things are good with them.
I missed you! Good update :) Perhaps Aunt Karen can come visit campus? So glad Kit put Melvin in his place.
Still LOVE this story!
Melvin is such a bastard! He should be proud of Kit’s success. And Tina is definately a keeper. Great chapter can’t wait for more!
You make me smile
You make me sing
You make me feel good everything
Guess who’s back! I just caught up with this amazing fanfic. I really like where it has gone, with Bette’s family and all. Please continue!
Good chapter. I can’t believe Melvin said the slut word to Kit. Ok Aunt Karen have something to do and maybe she will visit Bette later. Post soon, thanks!