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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 45
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Tina could feel her own jewel swelling as her lover’s passion coated syllables continued to drip down into her consciousness. The sun-kissed beauty could feel her wetness pooling at her core, her center throbbing as they continued their sensual dance.
The excitement of this public arena heightened the pleasure of the erotic waves now rolling through Bette’s fevered young body. A trickle of sweat slid down the side of her caramel colored face and landed on her lover’s shoulder as her eyes clamped tightly together and her body began to explode from the inside out.
She continued to moan sexily into her girlfriend’s ear as her weakened legs trembled and she leaned the weight of her body against the love of her life.
Tina held on tightly, as if her girlfriend’s life depended on the strength of her embrace.
“I’ve got you, Babe. I’ve got you.”, she murmured.
“Don’t let go”, Bette replied, her lips slightly shaking as she spoke.
“I won’t. I’ll never let go.”
“Promise?”
“Promise.”, said Tina, stroking her girlfriend’s dark locks as they swayed under the multicolored lights in a room full of strangers.
Alice had finally shrugged off the cloak of dark worries and concerns that hung around her spirit and nipped at her peace of mind. As she threw her arms around the feminine neck of dance partner number four, she caught a glimpse of the couple that she’d mentally coined BeTina. The intensity in Bette’s scrunched brow and the subtle expression of need conveyed through their tender embrace combined to alert Alice’s razor sharp senses that something was amiss.
When all of the pieces fit together to create an outrageous, yet logical picture, the blonde’s dark brown eyes lit up and her mouth opened slightly in amazement.
‘They did not just get it on out here on the dance floor. Would they? No. That’s just way too crazy.’, she thought.
As her mind struggled to find an alternate conclusion to the sated expression on Bette’s flushed face, Alice began to subconsciously study Bette’s figure, noting the fine details to add clarity to her current state of confusion. She was still in investigative reporter mode, studying the couple as they began to turn slowly, when her curious eyes locked onto a set of angry amber orbs.
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Thank goodness you are back. That was hot, sexy, and absolutely wonderful!
MTS… THANK YOU for continuing this story!!!!
Welcome back…no need to hang your head and sob. You’ve produced the goods. *lol* Nice chapter…
hey MTS. of course we remember your story. pls post soon.
Remember you and love your story please post sooner!!!
MTS I’m with mclaerin, no need to hang your head, you’ve just redeemed yourself!!! Post soon.
you came back with a vengence. excellent. please post sooner. have missed this story. thanks.
you’re back, awesome…it was hot and intense…i just hope alice won’t do anything to reuin B&T’s relationship
Guess who’s back? That was a great update to your story. I was wondering if we were going to have to put an APB out for you.
Good to see you back MTS and this chapter is awesome and love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Glad to see you back.I am MTS when i see a post from you.
Welcome back & what a great chapter to come back with
I missed this story! Thanks for posting again :) Hot dance floor number ;) and great introduction of new characters.
Hoo-Ray Hoo-Ray another great chapter. I’ve been missing this story something fierce. Bette and Tina on the dance floor were hot and it was nice to have a chapter with no bad news for for B or T this time around. I guess we’ll be getting back to reality soon and finding out how Tina deals w/ thinking Alice is still hot for her lady. Please don’t keep us waiting.
It’s good to have you back. Really enjoying this story.
Lara!!! Yay! I hope that she becomes more integrated with the gang, even if she’s currently with Holly. *Wink wink nudge nudge* lol Tina and Alice need to talk. Hopefully it goes well. Thanks, MTS! It’s great to see you post again. :)
I’m too late LOL.. but i really can’t read your story without leaving a comment.. Thank you..
MTS… i missed this last week.. have no idea how that happened… love your story… and i know life gets in the way of Fan Fiction..so write when you can… later baby
YES your back!!! I loves this story and your writing, soooo please post more often…
glad to have you back and i like the twists and turns you’re taking me into. loved your writing.
Hey MTS:)Long time no see. great update, thanks!
yass your back!!! :) amazing as always, :)
Now you see it’s hard to really get annoyed when you return with 9-page posts!I’m loving the story but I just want to go on the record as saying, you don’t have to parallel your story with the show, i.e. Bette and Alice DON’T have to get together! I really hope this doesn’t happen…they’re gonna have enough drama when Tina’s folks find out, they surely don’t need to add to it.
yay ur back :Dive missed ur wonderful writing!
this was great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make dana lara story I know it will be as gerat as this one!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for writing back I just missed this great Story Please continue!!!
yuk..I dun like Lara..but it will make it interesting..I hope they can still stay friendz&Dana can win Alice..
I’ve officially caught up on all your chapters…its been months but i’m back…anyhow, I think you captured the thoughts in Ms. Beverly’s head perfect….I think its even rougher coming out in the black community.