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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 45
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There was Tina. Cloaked in her protective instinct, her arms holding Bette tightly, her eyes narrowed into small slits, sending a penetrating stare directly into Alice’s soul. There wasn’t a great deal of light in the club, but there was enough light for her to see the tension in Tina’s clamped lips and furrowed brow.
Alice smiled lightly, uneasiness settling down on her.
‘I hope to God she doesn’t think I’m doing what it looks like I’m doing. I was just trying to figure them out. I was not checking out Bette. She looks pissed. Maybe she’s pissed at something and I just happened to catch her gaze.’, she thought.
Tina seemed to come out of her irritated trance and her brow relaxed. She smiled uncomfortably at Alice before closing her eyes and resting her head on her lover’s shoulder.
* * *
While Alice and Tina were bumping eyes on the dance floor, Dana sat outside of the club with her new friend. Their knees drawn to their chests as they sat side-by-side on the sidewalk, their backs pressed against the brick of the building.
“That woman you were with, she was an accident waiting to happen to you.”, said Lara, pulling strands of shoulder-length, crimson colored locks behind her left ear.
“Yeah? So.who is she? What’s the deal?”, asked Dana, fighting the nervousness that was rapidly recovering from its alcohol-induced paralysis.
“I don’t even know her name. I was hanging out here a few weeks ago with some friends when she tried to pick me up. She was buying me drinks, sweet talking me. Trying to get me all liquored up so she could take me home. I was leaving the club with her when one of my friends saw me and took me on home.”, said Lara.
“So how did your friend know about this woman?”, asked Dana.
The two stopped talking for a moment, their eyes following as a group of women joked loudly with each other before heading into the club.
“Well, one of my friends has a friend named Kim. Kim was out at ‘The Rainbow Room’, you know, that ***** club up on Alameda?”
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Thank goodness you are back. That was hot, sexy, and absolutely wonderful!
MTS… THANK YOU for continuing this story!!!!
Welcome back…no need to hang your head and sob. You’ve produced the goods. *lol* Nice chapter…
hey MTS. of course we remember your story. pls post soon.
Remember you and love your story please post sooner!!!
MTS I’m with mclaerin, no need to hang your head, you’ve just redeemed yourself!!! Post soon.
you came back with a vengence. excellent. please post sooner. have missed this story. thanks.
you’re back, awesome…it was hot and intense…i just hope alice won’t do anything to reuin B&T’s relationship
Guess who’s back? That was a great update to your story. I was wondering if we were going to have to put an APB out for you.
Good to see you back MTS and this chapter is awesome and love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Glad to see you back.I am MTS when i see a post from you.
Welcome back & what a great chapter to come back with
I missed this story! Thanks for posting again :) Hot dance floor number ;) and great introduction of new characters.
Hoo-Ray Hoo-Ray another great chapter. I’ve been missing this story something fierce. Bette and Tina on the dance floor were hot and it was nice to have a chapter with no bad news for for B or T this time around. I guess we’ll be getting back to reality soon and finding out how Tina deals w/ thinking Alice is still hot for her lady. Please don’t keep us waiting.
It’s good to have you back. Really enjoying this story.
Lara!!! Yay! I hope that she becomes more integrated with the gang, even if she’s currently with Holly. *Wink wink nudge nudge* lol Tina and Alice need to talk. Hopefully it goes well. Thanks, MTS! It’s great to see you post again. :)
I’m too late LOL.. but i really can’t read your story without leaving a comment.. Thank you..
MTS… i missed this last week.. have no idea how that happened… love your story… and i know life gets in the way of Fan Fiction..so write when you can… later baby
YES your back!!! I loves this story and your writing, soooo please post more often…
glad to have you back and i like the twists and turns you’re taking me into. loved your writing.
Hey MTS:)Long time no see. great update, thanks!
yass your back!!! :) amazing as always, :)
Now you see it’s hard to really get annoyed when you return with 9-page posts!I’m loving the story but I just want to go on the record as saying, you don’t have to parallel your story with the show, i.e. Bette and Alice DON’T have to get together! I really hope this doesn’t happen…they’re gonna have enough drama when Tina’s folks find out, they surely don’t need to add to it.
yay ur back :Dive missed ur wonderful writing!
this was great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make dana lara story I know it will be as gerat as this one!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for writing back I just missed this great Story Please continue!!!
yuk..I dun like Lara..but it will make it interesting..I hope they can still stay friendz&Dana can win Alice..
I’ve officially caught up on all your chapters…its been months but i’m back…anyhow, I think you captured the thoughts in Ms. Beverly’s head perfect….I think its even rougher coming out in the black community.