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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 54
“Oh, shit. Tina…you’re driving me crazy.”
Tina smiled. “I like driving. Open please.”
The bronzed young woman complied. Feeling the smooth touch of her lover’s body against her swollen center was the reward.
“Mmmm. That’s nice, Baby.”
Tina didn’t respond, her tongue was tied up, dragging itself along the soft, caramel flesh of Bette’s neck. The pink muscle made it’s way down to an erect right nipple, circling the hardened nub, sending chills down Bette’s spine.
The fearless blonde pushed herself against her lover’s sacred spot, relishing the sound of her girlfriend’s vocal reaction.
Tina loved both breasts, sucking the soft flesh into her heated mouth, heightening her partner’s liquid desire with each flick of the tongue.
Bette’s whole body jerked when Tina finally slid her index finger down through the moist curls and caressed the swollen jewel.
“Oh my God!”
“Shhh….”, Tina whispered.
Bette bit her lower lip as her lover’s nimble fingertips drew circles against the most sensitive part of her body. Her hips moved with the strokes, her desire guiding her movements.
Tina focused her circular motions on her girlfriend’s clit, the swelling and wetness she found a reflection of her own excitement. Her fingers slid against the moistened skin, it was her turn to moan. The sultry tendrils of her lover’s voice slid inside Tina, creating an urgency, hastening her movements, desiring to drive Bette’s climax.
Dark brown orbs rolled back in their sockets as Bette closed her eyes and felt the feathery waves of an internal explosion begin a gentle ripple. She wanted this. She needed this. Every part of her body needed this.
The determined young blonde felt the slick of her girlfriend’s love-making sweat. It pushed its way through Bette’s heated skin, begging for relief on the caramel colored surface. Tina sucked on the hard left nipple as her lover’s climatic chorus began.
She wanted Bette to explode. Wanted the lovely colors to float in her partner’s mind. She wanted to cement their uncertain future with the power of her touch.
Tina’s wishes came true.
Bette’s closed eyes squinted tightly, her hands clutching the bedspread, her moistened body raised, her passion-dipped voice painting a beautiful path to release.
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(44 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
1st…….brb
“Oh my God!” “Shhh….”, Tina whispered. Bette bit her lower lip as her lover’s nimble fingertips drew circles against the most sensitive part of her body…………..Its a wonder Bette didn’t bite her own lip off; I damn near did! ^_^ ……… Tina sucked on the hard left nipple as her lover’s climatic chorus began. She wanted Bette to explode. Wanted the lovely colors to float in her partner’s mind. She wanted to cement their uncertain future with the power of her touch. Bette’s closed eyes squinted tightly, her hands clutching the bedspread, her moistened body raised, her passion-dipped voice painting a beautiful path to release. ….. You make their lovemaking seem to erotic and completely passionate. As far as Janice, her sadness almost made me want to cry.
freakin awesome chapter.
4 ever read. Just keep writing.
Bette’s a screamer …lol!!!! I hope Janice and Bette do develop a mother daughter relationship!!!!
Ditto on what snQQpy said. Janice’s evening made me think of that one Keith Urban song. Everytime it comes on the radio I want to shoot the radio because it’s so depressing.
love this story… so glad you came back to us… i knew janice would come through… please continue when you can… thanks
hot their is hope janice
Great chapter, I’m never disappointed!
ah thanks swimmie. just the way to close the weekend. it was excellent as always. i did bite my lip snQQpy. just keep writing. thanks.
your gonna think im on drugs. no im not. just been drinking too much. MTS. i do know who i was reading but my brain pathways are not firing on all cylinders. sorry.
Soooo….Bette’s a screamer! LOL! Your love scenes are so erotic and passionate between Bette and Tina. To find love so deep at their age is a miracle. I just hope they can hold on to that love as the days and months go by….Tina’s coming out with her folks is on the horizon still. I love your writing. As long as you keep writing, I will keep right on reading!
So glad Bette Mother called, It will make Bettes life a wee bit easier. Now if we can keep Melvin away from Tinas family. Let hope that Janice doesnt disappoint Bette ever again. thanks
janice’s fridge and her life just like mine: empty and lonely and i hope that she and Bette can gorw closer to each other…B&T lovemaking was amazingly hot and also promissing
As one door closes another door opens. Hopefully that door will lead to a relationship for mother and daughter. Bette needs her mother more than ever. Tina, Bette and Janice that would be a wonderful picture. Janice has already met Tina and seems to like her a lot, so that will not be an issue. I hope that you will continue to give us a bird’s eye view of those three developing their relationship.
Thi is awesome and I agree with pattigloatn and let see what’s next, thanks!
Don’t worry MTS-As long as you keep writing I’ll be reading. Nice to see Bette and Tina reconnect. Post soon!
Excellent! You get better with every chapter! T&B was so senual erotic and passionate. I absolutely adore thier relationship! I feel bad for Janice. I hope she is able to rebuild her relationship with Bette.
I love this story and it’s great to have you back, so your comment about that you’ll keep writing makes me happy :o)) Amazing to see a B&T reconnection, more of those LOL. Of course I’m a little sad for Janice, but it’s her own fault. I truly hope she will be there for Bette this time….post soon.
Great as ever. Please keeping coming. ;)
Each chapter is better than the last, Still have this horrible feeling that Melvin is going to cause grief for our favourite couple, hope that Bette & her mother become close, and hope we have lots more love making scene’s HOT
I really like the way you refresh our memories by rewriting previous scenes. I also like how you’ve gone into Janice’s mind and am taking a course that may lead to a real mother/daughter relationship. Bravo MTS. I’m feeling MTS after every new chapter. Thank you.
MTS, Thank you for this sensual reconnect between Bette and Tina. It was perfectly measured and a wonderful way to reunite these characters after everything the previous days had brought. One thing is that Tina needs to share her experiences with homophobia with Bette especially with Courtney’s parents. It was wonderful to see Janice’s point of view and her acceptance of her daughter. I hope that there maybe soon thawing of hostilities between them and even the start of a friendship. Please make it so. Thank you for this joyous gift. Your Loyal Fan.
so glad i finally got to catch up…what can i say…you’re too bad!!!!!!love the story, hang out for the story….thnx