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The Roommates: Chapter Twelve
The proud, poised, caramel-colored beauty extended her hand as gracefully as she could and said, Eric. Its good to finally meet you. Tina talks about you all the time. Im Bette, Tinas roommate and this is my girlfriend, Sidney. This was the first time Tina had heard Bette reference Sidney as her girlfriend. This was also the first time Bette had felt comfortable enough using the term.
Eric shook hands with both women; a little thrown that Sidney was Bettes girlfriend. He didnt know what to think. Tina was at a total lost for words. Just this morning, Tina had held Bette in her arms and kissed her soft lips. Just this morning they had expressed their shared love. And now, they were standing here under the pretense of simply being roommates; friends at best. To Tina, this whole situation was ridiculous. In that moment she forgot about Eric, the homophobia surrounding her life, and the fear she had of her own sexuality. She forgot about all those things and simply relished the sight of Bette and the memory of the love she knew was there between them.
Tina wanted to take Bette into her arms, kiss her lips, and forget that rest of the world existed. Then, she looked into Bettes dark brown eyes and saw something unexpected. She expected Bette to meet her gaze and relay her emotion in the sadness in those dark brown pools. She expected this subtle signal from her early morning lover and what she saw hardened her bleeding heart. Where she expected to see sadness, she found contentment. Not only was Bette content, but she refused to make that subtle, silent, eye contact with Tina, effectively shutting off their privately furtive communication. Her body language told Tina that she was comfortable with Sidney and that Tinas love was no longer needed.
This all happened in mere fractions of a second and as the four stood there talking about the days activities, Tina felt her resentment begin to grow. She felt as if her love had been rejected. So, this is what you choose, Bette? This is it, huh? You told me that I was the one and now youre so happy and in love with HER? Tinas stubbornness and unwillingness to be hurt any further forced her to stand taller and smile brighter. She didnt want Bette to see how much she was hurting, so she smiled and pretended she was happy.
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(97 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
I dont think anyone could give up on this… its a great story and you keep the intensity going the whole way through. Im looking forward to the next chapters…
Another great chapter and I love your story. I have only a question : why Bette didn’t told to Sydney the truth about what happened between her and Tina ?
I’m so happy that you post this story soon Pls. I’m so really intense what next happen for Bette and Tina.
I like this a lot esp. the different situation and views you are approaching. Good Job
Dude that was filled up with such beautifully written agnst. I totally understood both girls points of view, awesome writing. I wish I could give Tina a hug. You rock.
Very well written and your pace is perfect. Ah, the communication (or lack thereof) between young loves — you have captured the conflict perfectly, in my opinion.
ok that’s enough for right now….I’ll be returning on my tedious but rewarding quest in a couple of hours. ( I’m a slow reader)
OMG…you must get those two together!! What’s a world without B&T?! I love this piece, please keep it up;-)
this is a very good story even though it is not looking good for Bette and Tina. Please post soon again
Thanks for posting the chapters so quickly.
Great story keep up the good work although it is breaking my heart
sob sob…poor Tina
i love this story.. can’t wait for more, hopefully they will be together.. i’m sure you’ll find a way to get them together.. :) keep up the great work!
Won’t give up on B&T. Won’t give up on you!
I’m not giving up on you or this story. Its just too good.
Poor Bette and Tina they are sooo much in conflict with there inner feels that they do not know how to open up to one another.EXCELLENT chapter again,please post soon.
(sniffles) …now that I’ve purchased the knee pads, you send me away for tissues…
This is a great story! Thanks so much for writing it!
Well written and looking foward to seeing where you take it.
Thanks for another chapter. The accommodations they are making are sad. I’m enjoying the alternate scenario (college students)you have created.
Great story but please bring them together soon.
oh wow…what a situation…sniff…sob…:(
More really, really soon……..thanks
I mean, could the angst-o-meter GO any higher?? this is so so good, I love the way you slowed down the interaction between B & T when they introduced their respective partners. Eric’s a homophobic jackass…he doesn’t know his head from his a$$ right now. i can’t wait for the next chapter!! Please post soon!
Good chapter. I cannot wait for the boyfriend to go home. My heartbreaks for Tina..
Thank you so much for a great story and I’ll be here all the way! =0)
someone needs to go for what they want!
I like the fact they didn’t begin a relationship right away, it gives you something to write about. Can’t wait to see how everything progress. Keep the drama flowing.
fan-tas-tic. the way you show them interacting with their boy/girl friends and them interacting and battling out their emotions, it’s amazing, and you’re such a great descriptive writer too! please post soon, k?
Wow excellent chapter. Bette and Tina need to do something for each other, Tina didn’t feel anything from Eric and she need to feel Bette by herside. Well let see what happen next, please post soon. Than you!