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The Roommates: Chapter Twelve
However, that wasnt what Bette was doing at all. Bette looked at Tina and Eric and saw a couple that looked as though they fit perfectly together. They had been together for four years. Four years was a long time and Bette didnt want to be the reason this long-term couple parted ways. She wanted Tina to be happy and from the looks of it, Tina was having a great time with Eric. And as much as she wanted to hate him or demonize him, Bette found that Eric was actually pretty cute and charming in his own way. He seemed to treat Tina well and Bette didnt want to interfere. He was the perfect boyfriend for her perfect roommate and she didnt want to interfere with their relationship. Tina even looked different from any time Bette had seen her. She actually had on a dress and Bette had never seen her wear a dress before. She seemed to wear a whole new persona that Bette had yet to meet. I obviously dont know her as well as I thought. She has so many dimensions. In this dimension, there is no room for me.
Bette gazed at Tina when she wasnt looking, God, shes beautiful. Look at that smile. Shes really happy. I just want her to be happy. And Eric makes her happy. Sidney is so right for me and I think shes falling in love with me. I owe it to her to be devoted and sincere. Shes so wonderful.
She loved Tina too much to cause her any more pain and confusion and resolved to do what she knew she must: Let Tina go.
Well, we dont want to hold you up. You guys have a lot of catching up to do and a finite amount of time. said Bette.
Eric smiled at Tina and squeezed her hand, Yes, we do. It was really nice meeting you guys.
Likewise, said Sidney.
The two couples parted ways and as Eric and Tina continued to walk the halls of The Getty, Eric said, I didnt know your roommate was a *****.
Yeah, shes kind of just figuring that out.
Damn. Thats a shame. She a total knockout too. Both of em are. Im sure theyd have no problem finding boyfriends., said Eric.
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(97 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
I dont think anyone could give up on this… its a great story and you keep the intensity going the whole way through. Im looking forward to the next chapters…
Another great chapter and I love your story. I have only a question : why Bette didn’t told to Sydney the truth about what happened between her and Tina ?
I’m so happy that you post this story soon Pls. I’m so really intense what next happen for Bette and Tina.
I like this a lot esp. the different situation and views you are approaching. Good Job
Dude that was filled up with such beautifully written agnst. I totally understood both girls points of view, awesome writing. I wish I could give Tina a hug. You rock.
Very well written and your pace is perfect. Ah, the communication (or lack thereof) between young loves — you have captured the conflict perfectly, in my opinion.
ok that’s enough for right now….I’ll be returning on my tedious but rewarding quest in a couple of hours. ( I’m a slow reader)
OMG…you must get those two together!! What’s a world without B&T?! I love this piece, please keep it up;-)
this is a very good story even though it is not looking good for Bette and Tina. Please post soon again
Thanks for posting the chapters so quickly.
Great story keep up the good work although it is breaking my heart
sob sob…poor Tina
i love this story.. can’t wait for more, hopefully they will be together.. i’m sure you’ll find a way to get them together.. :) keep up the great work!
Won’t give up on B&T. Won’t give up on you!
I’m not giving up on you or this story. Its just too good.
Poor Bette and Tina they are sooo much in conflict with there inner feels that they do not know how to open up to one another.EXCELLENT chapter again,please post soon.
(sniffles) …now that I’ve purchased the knee pads, you send me away for tissues…
This is a great story! Thanks so much for writing it!
Well written and looking foward to seeing where you take it.
Thanks for another chapter. The accommodations they are making are sad. I’m enjoying the alternate scenario (college students)you have created.
Great story but please bring them together soon.
oh wow…what a situation…sniff…sob…:(
More really, really soon……..thanks
I mean, could the angst-o-meter GO any higher?? this is so so good, I love the way you slowed down the interaction between B & T when they introduced their respective partners. Eric’s a homophobic jackass…he doesn’t know his head from his a$$ right now. i can’t wait for the next chapter!! Please post soon!
Good chapter. I cannot wait for the boyfriend to go home. My heartbreaks for Tina..
Thank you so much for a great story and I’ll be here all the way! =0)
someone needs to go for what they want!
I like the fact they didn’t begin a relationship right away, it gives you something to write about. Can’t wait to see how everything progress. Keep the drama flowing.
fan-tas-tic. the way you show them interacting with their boy/girl friends and them interacting and battling out their emotions, it’s amazing, and you’re such a great descriptive writer too! please post soon, k?
Wow excellent chapter. Bette and Tina need to do something for each other, Tina didn’t feel anything from Eric and she need to feel Bette by herside. Well let see what happen next, please post soon. Than you!