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The Set Up (2)
She ran around her room trying to decide what to do – to answer the door or not to answer it – but finally, she was opening it. Slowly.
“Uh … hey.”
“Hi Tina,” Bette smiled, dressed in a smart pant suit and confident, which was emphasized by her relaxed posture, leaning against the door. “Are you … gonna let me in?”
Tina felt a rush of excitement, but she also felt exposed. “Umm … well I was trying a few things on … sorry, I was running a little behind schedule.”
“Maybe I can help.”
“No!” Tina gasped, quickly laughing at herself before she relaxed her shoulders. “Look, I’m terrible at all this. I’ll just be honest. I really didn’t have time to find something nice, so I’m wearing something that a stripper would blush at, and I really don’t want you to see me in it.”
Bette chuckled. “Sounds kinda nice.”
“Ha ha,” Tina smiled, rolling her eyes. “Just give me one second, okay? I’m gonna go take it off and throw something else on so I can invite you in.”
“So I’m … just gonna wait here …”
“Right.”
Bette flashed her smile and stood straight. “I’ll be waiting.”
“Thanks,” Tina whispered, closing the door again and cursing herself as she ran back into her bedroom. It only took another two minutes before she opened the door again to see Bette sitting on the step. “I’m so sorry. You can come in.”
“Are you sure I can’t see that dress?” Bette teased, walking past Tina with her usual swagger. “It sounds very promising.”
“No, it’s like two sizes too small,” Tina blushed, closing the door to look at Bette. “I actually don’t know why I still have it … I mean, I guess it’s from when I was younger … it just doesn’t fit the same.”
“Well I like the … uh … growing you’ve done since.”
Tina was flattered, but she tried not to show it. “Uh huh.”
“And that dress you have on is … really something. You look beautiful.”
“Thank you,” Tina smiled, looking down and then back up to catch Bette staring at her. She liked that she could catch her in the act.
“Well,” Bette started, clearing her throat. “Should we get going?”
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(77 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Wow impressive story can’t wait for more!
I loved the whole flirting moment, smooth and to the point… there is no hidden agenda there! I am enjoying the story too but I feel exhausted just thinking about having to handle a child like Angelica! She is a brilliant little character though! Thanks
oh bette… flowers, candy, baskets of fruit or whatever should be on the way to tina… love this story… and i know bette will find a way and they will be together… and never said what did did … wondering what job she has… great story.. pps
Wow keep them coming, I’m hooked.
More, more, more please!
Man Bette sure step in at the end of the dste. Now some nice flowers and another date maybe with Angie. I hope ATins will for give her. Great Chapter!!! PPS
GR giveth glee and gladness; GR taketh away… Just kidding. I trust that Bette will make this right, and soon. In fact, I’ll just sit here and wait.
Oh thats good and hope Bette send Tina flowers soon. Please post more, thanks!
Loved it.
yyyeeeaaahhh i love it thank you please mmmoorrreeeeee!!!
Just read the first two chapters and this story is so great i can’t wait to see the next update so PPS!
I’m so happy to read a new story of yours, i really miss you around here,DON’T DO THAT AGAIN PLEASE!!About the story,i love Bette and Angelica personality and Tina’s sincerity. I think this misunderstanding between Bette and Tina is because they don’t know each other enough still and there is no way Tina will miss the hottest Bette ha!pd: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR SHARE THIS NEW ONE!
Wow!! … Well, I just manage to catch up this story and looks like I’ll be the one amongst others who would be pining for more updates from you GR!! ;-) looks like its time for Bette to make use of the little information she got through the bed of roses! :-D it’s a sad ending of the date after all the fun flirting in the beginning :-( I hope you’ll update soon to make Bette make the things right again and PPVS??? :-)
I haven’t read such a exhilirating story in a long time. Just love it!
Thank you for another great story.PPS
One small jokingly slip and poor Bette is in the dog house. Love the moment in the movie theater.
Wow I love how you capture real moments and real emotions you’re an amazing writer
You know, that whole date is something I can see myself doing, if I felt as connected as these two do. Bette’s mishap can happen to anyone. I think Tina has already let it go or else she would not let Bette take another sip of her coffee and bid her “have a nice life”. I loved the date, especially the “arm sneak” like she is used to doing it. Bette’s confidence is admirable. Thanks GR 😘 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 just in case. You know what I mean GR 😉
I’m really enjoying this story. I love how Tina is both motherly and extremely hot at the same time. I hope they work things out soon….