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The Set Up (30) – Final Chapter
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“Yeah … no, it’s okay …”
He looked away so he wouldn’t be caught staring at her either. He was not the type to stare, nor to smile so foolishly so often.
Just as Angelica noticed something strange in the background, she looked around, and saw both Bette and Tina at the far side of restaurant, looking around for the booth.
As Bette and Tina hung onto each other and finally found where Angelica sat, they realized they’d been caught staring. They both giggled, and Tina waved over to her daughter just as Bette pulled down her arm and tried to smother her laughter.
Angelica raised her hand as if to wave, her eyebrow arched as Bette and Tina slowly chuckled their way out of sight.
“They’re really nice,” he said, interrupting her thoughts.
“They’re obvious,” Angelica sighed with a breath of laughter, trying desperately to forget where she was, and how embarrassed she felt. She put her hand on her neck and looked down at the table.
“And they uh … they seem to think we’d enjoy having dinner together.”
She looked up, blushing wildly as she bit her lip. “Yeah!” she blurted with a nervous laugh, pulling the napkin down, into her lap so she could obsessively straighten it out.
“Hey.”
When she looked up, he graciously offered out his hand to her.
“I’m Darnell. I don’t think … I’ve introduced myself to you yet.”
Angelica fit her hand into his, enjoying the tingles she had for a moment before she smiled, too, and answered. “Angelica.”
“You look … beautiful.”
And the perfect way he said it melted her, because she believed him. For once out of all the times she’d heard just that phrase, it brought a confidence to her that she’d been lacking for some time. She folded her hands and rested her chin on them, smiling in earnest, staring back at him. “You’re pretty beautiful yourself.”
“Beautiful? … Hmm, I think I like that,” he chuckled, scooping up his menu with such little effort that Angelica had to clear her throat again to distract herself from all the thoughts racing through her mind. Her attraction to him was strong, but certainly their chemistry couldn’t be as powerful, could it? “We’re gonna have a great dinner, and then I’m taking you back home. I promised I’d do just that, and I have a feeling I wouldn’t wanna upset your parents, would I?”
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When you love something from the first chapter it only makes it that much sadder when ut has to come to an end. Beautifully written as always GR. Hope to see you back real soon :D
Such an AMAZING Story!!!! Thank you so much for it!!! You wrote it so beautifuly and it was so full of love thankyou!!! Hope to get a new story from you soon.
I really enjoyed this story. I was however thinking that at some point that Angie’s “sperm donor”, was going to make an appearance and try to start trouble for Tina and Bette, and that we would really see how Angie had grown to love Bette, and start to call her Mom or her Mama B. But as it was written, I truly still did love it dearly. Thank You so much. Looking forward to another one of your stories.
Thank for your wonderful story! No drama, no terror, just pure unadulterated love for this amazing family. I appreciate the time and effort that you put forth. Sorry to see this story end but I am sure that there is another masterpiece on your computer to come. Thank you.
Another great story from a great storyteller. Thanks GR😘
love it, hope you do a sequel based on angie andd darnell w/ b&t as doting grandparents or jusr post or two about their future. thanks for this story
Wonderful story!
Wonderful. Just read all your updates for this story and am really sorry to see the end of it. Thank you for an excellent story.
Love how this story end with three of them sharing a moment. this is a story all about love and you did a fantastic job as always. Kind of sad it end but still end well, and every story will end eventually. Hope we can see ur next story soon, a girl can hope. Thank you again!
i loved it… also so sad to see it end… you did a GREAT job with this story… thank you so much… please continue with more of the same…
I absolutely loved this story, I was hooked from the very beginning. I’m sad to see it end but I did enjoy the ride. Can’t wait to see what you have next ! Thank you for such an amazing story
Hi there GrindRight! nice ending to a great story, compelling from the first chapter, with characters full of emotions and unforgettable dialogues.I really admire you, I love the way you tell your story, when you want to convey something, you do it with your writing very easy and that is just because you have talent.I can not stand the urge to read a new story of yours.Reading “Fifty shades of Grey”, you’ve read it?, I could not help imagining a version of it with Bette and Tina of course written by you,what do you think? the Fifty shades of Porter.I would die if you do it,but after of read it! hahahaha!
I love this story; sorry it has ended
BRAVA! *standing ovation*. I’m sorry to see this sorry end, but I’m ready for your next one. Thank you for sharing this.
Beautiful ending to an amazing story.
AN amazing story sorry to see it end.
Amazing story.Thank you sooo much.Please continue writing.
I hate to see it end, but loved every word. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
Wow, so sad to see this story go. Please start a new fix soon, as you are one of those unique writers with stories so vivid and rich they seem so real. Excellent fix with a creative ending!
Thank you GR!! I do enjoy reading your story! :-) This will be one of the story which will be re-read in the future :-) the final chapter is simply heart warming and it’s so touching on how Angelica realized on how much Tina took her role from being someone strong to look after her daughter to finally being herself and let Bette be the strong one for her and Angelica :-) so sweet – so lovely :-) thanks again GR!! Appreciate your kindness in sharing your amazing talent with us! will be stick around and waiting for more stories from you ;-)
I just loved! Each chapter was perfect. Thanks and I can’t wait to read the next one!
Thank you for your amazing writing. You have created the perfect story for your characters. I loved every chapter and the way you created Angie’s future. Perfect! I’m sad to see it end but look forward to more incredible stories. Awesome!
Read it all at once – great stuff, thanks for writing it! :)
Hello GrindRight,How are you? Sorry I’ve been away for such a long time. The intensity of the sex scenes in yourStory got me in trouble. I am just now escaping the arms of someonewho doesn’t belong to me. I’m grateful that I didn’t get caught inEurope. (Mercy), you are most definitely an amazing writing. “The Set Up”, althoughthis literally happened to me while reading your story, I also hate that it’sending. And the moral to the story is this “Always choose Love”. Je t’aime GrindRight!
That was awesome and beautiful and is sad to see it ending. Thanks for sharing this story with us, can’t wait to see your new story coming, thanks!
I wished you had continued this story….
I really enjoyed this Story and would give five stars for each of the 30 posts – if I had the time :)
A Sequel would be great with Bette and Tina as Grand moms :)
Loved it…. .Thank you