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    The Set Up (30) – Final Chapter

    Story written on August 15, 2012 by GrindRight.
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    Final chapter.

    “Darn,” Tina whispered, “I have to go to the bathroom!”

    “Can’t it wait?” Angelica chuckled, the host waiting as the women talked quietly amongst themselves. “I told you it was a terrible decision – having those three glasses of water before we left. Why did you do that?”

    Tina chuckled for a moment, and shrugged. “I don’t know … Uhhh, maybe I’ll come with you. I can hold it.”

    “Don’t be ridiculous,” Angelica breathed with laughter, shaking her head. “I’ll go get the table. I’ll wave when I see you. Go, go.”

    “Are you sure?”

    “Of course I’m sure,” she insisted, following behind the host and just smiling to herself at her mother’s unpredictability. It was one of the things she’d always found comforting and sweet. Even as a child, her mother had always had her ridiculous, unpredictable moments. And it still made her smile.

    Angelica looked around at the décor, impressed that her mother had found such a nice place on short notice as she made her way down an aisle of tables to yet another, and then another. They were getting to a dimply-lit spot, and she became a little suspicious just as she caught sight of something incredible. It was the same young man from a few days ago, when he had stolen all of her sense away. And it was happening again. She almost lost her footing, but she simply paused and looked on in disbelief as the host held her hand out toward the table where he sat.

    “Will the other woman be joining you both?”

    Angelica fought to find her voice again, clearing her throat as she understood. “No … no, she won’t.” She’d better not be!

    “Alright, well enjoy your dinner,” the woman smiled as Angelica finally made her way to sit at the table – in the booth as she caught her breath with a world of uncertainty. She pushed back against the seat as far as she could – entirely too close to this man who could render her speechless. He could do things to her she had never understood in stories or movies. They were such foreign feelings that she was made nervous by them.
    But somehow, Angelica managed a little, shy smile. “Hi.”

    “Sorry about all this,” he smiled back, his hands clasped over the table, accentuating the build of his arms – even through his button up shirt. Angelica tried not to notice, so she cleared her throat again, willing herself to remember what he had just said.

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    1. When you love something from the first chapter it only makes it that much sadder when ut has to come to an end. Beautifully written as always GR. Hope to see you back real soon :D

    2. Such an AMAZING Story!!!! Thank you so much for it!!! You wrote it so beautifuly and it was so full of love thankyou!!! Hope to get a new story from you soon.

    3. I really enjoyed this story. I was however thinking that at some point that Angie’s “sperm donor”, was going to make an appearance and try to start trouble for Tina and Bette, and that we would really see how Angie had grown to love Bette, and start to call her Mom or her Mama B. But as it was written, I truly still did love it dearly. Thank You so much. Looking forward to another one of your stories.

    4. Thank for your wonderful story! No drama, no terror, just pure unadulterated love for this amazing family. I appreciate the time and effort that you put forth. Sorry to see this story end but I am sure that there is another masterpiece on your computer to come. Thank you.

    9. Love how this story end with three of them sharing a moment. this is a story all about love and you did a fantastic job as always. Kind of sad it end but still end well, and every story will end eventually. Hope we can see ur next story soon, a girl can hope. Thank you again!

    11. I absolutely loved this story, I was hooked from the very beginning. I’m sad to see it end but I did enjoy the ride. Can’t wait to see what you have next ! Thank you for such an amazing story

    12. Hi there GrindRight! nice ending to a great story, compelling from the first chapter, with characters full of emotions and unforgettable dialogues.I really admire you, I love the way you tell your story, when you want to convey something, you do it with your writing very easy and that is just because you have talent.I can not stand the urge to read a new story of yours.Reading “Fifty shades of Grey”, you’ve read it?, I could not help imagining a version of it with Bette and Tina of course written by you,what do you think? the Fifty shades of Porter.I would die if you do it,but after of read it! hahahaha!

    19. Wow, so sad to see this story go. Please start a new fix soon, as you are one of those unique writers with stories so vivid and rich they seem so real. Excellent fix with a creative ending!

    20. Thank you GR!! I do enjoy reading your story! :-) This will be one of the story which will be re-read in the future :-) the final chapter is simply heart warming and it’s so touching on how Angelica realized on how much Tina took her role from being someone strong to look after her daughter to finally being herself and let Bette be the strong one for her and Angelica :-) so sweet – so lovely :-) thanks again GR!! Appreciate your kindness in sharing your amazing talent with us! will be stick around and waiting for more stories from you ;-)

    22. Thank you for your amazing writing. You have created the perfect story for your characters. I loved every chapter and the way you created Angie’s future. Perfect! I’m sad to see it end but look forward to more incredible stories. Awesome!

    24. Hello GrindRight,How are you? Sorry I’ve been away for such a long time. The intensity of the sex scenes in yourStory got me in trouble. I am just now escaping the arms of someonewho doesn’t belong to me. I’m grateful that I didn’t get caught inEurope. (Mercy), you are most definitely an amazing writing. “The Set Up”, althoughthis literally happened to me while reading your story, I also hate that it’sending. And the moral to the story is this “Always choose Love”. Je t’aime GrindRight!

    27. I really enjoyed this Story and would give five stars for each of the 30 posts – if I had the time :)

      A Sequel would be great with Bette and Tina as Grand moms :)

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