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‘What can I get you?’ She asked, leaning over and turning her head slightly so that she could hear. Bette smiled and mimicked her movement so that her lips were inches from the woman’s ear. Her perfume filled the space between them and the barmaid moved her body a little closer to Bette.
‘Two large Dirty Martini’s please… oh and two Sambuca’s whilst you’re at it.’ She nodded and turned around to the spirits, her t-shirt clung to the right places and fell off her in others. Bette couldn’t help but stared and was jolted out of her reverie by Alice’s voice.
‘Hitting it hard tonight aren’t you? Thought you were doing a thing with Jody tomorrow?
‘Well, I managed to get that switched to another day; I figured I might need the resistance if she’s going to be here all night. Although I have to admit, the present distraction is nice’ Bette half-smiled as she met Alice’s eyes trying to keep it light and moving her eyes towards the barmaid. Alice chuckled briefly.
‘Still? Un-fucking believable, I thought you’d managed to shake those feelings off? And since when did Bette Porter do deep and meaningful anyway?’ Her eyes were piercing and Bette was pleased when the drinks were banged down on the bar.
’10 dollars please’ She held Bette’s stare as she gave her 15.
‘And whatever you’re having as well.. I’m sorry, I didn’t catch your name…’ Bette trailed off and held her end of the money as the barmaid took the other.
‘I didn’t throw it but thanks.’ Bette let go and mentally shrugged. Moving her eyes down to the drinks she tried not to think about the difficulty of tonight’s… situation. ‘It’s Jen though.’ The barmaid held up a shot of what looked like Tequila and raised it to Bette with a smile.
‘Nice to meet you Jen, I’m Bette.’ She leaned forward and raised the Sambuca shot. She smirked and turned away. ‘Here you go, you’re helping me.’ She handed Alice one of the Sambuca’s.
‘You’re avoiding.’ Alice chastised. ‘Don’t think I didn’t notice that piss poor attempt to chat up the bar staff, was that for my benefit? cause you aren’t kidding anyone! If Bette Porter had really been interested, she would have had her up against the bar by now’
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Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.