Fan Fiction
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The start
‘Just shut up and drink’
Bette felt the burn of the smooth sambuca as it oozed down her throat quickly replaced by the sweet after taste and exhaled loudly.
‘Woo – man I love those’ Alice’s face seemed to suggest otherwise.
‘So, anyone else here?’ She asked after placing her empty glass back on the bar and taking off her jacket. She placed it on the stool beside her and leaned in to hear Alice as she picked up her Martini.
‘Now I know you’re not asking about Shane or anyone else. If you’re asking, is Tina here, then the answer is yes, and she’s right over there with her boyfriend.’ She pointed with her glass towards the other side of the room.
Involuntarily, Bette’s eyes followed the gesture and caught sight of Tina stood holding a glass and talking with her boyfriend to someone Bette didn’t know. She looked stunning in her blue dress and black leggings. She was wearing heels which gave her height and made her legs look even more stunning than they normally did. She was wearing long earrings that framed her face and her blonde hair had been straightened into position, possessing a glow that made her eyes sparkle. She made eye contact with Bette and smiled. Bette’s breath caught. She waved with her glass and Bette, normally smooth, fumbled with hers to look casual. Bette smiled back and mouthed hi.
‘Oh, god, I’ve lost you for the evening now haven’t I?’ Alice groaned. ‘It’s pathetic and totally not gonna happen.’
‘What, no, it’s not like that, you just said it yourself, she’s with her boyfriend.’ Bette broke eye contact with Tina and turned back to Alice. All she received was a look that radiated sarcasm.
‘What?’ Bette asked.
‘Nothing.’ Alice took a swig of her drink, ‘you’re just asking for trouble Bette.’
‘I don’t know what you’re talking about.’ She took a sip and allowed her eyes to return to the direction of Tina.
*****
‘Hello’ Bette made eye contact and felt her stomach tense.
‘Hi, you made it then?’ Tina asked, her face lit up illuminating her features, a feint southern drawl on her Hi had Bette’s heart fluttering in her chest.
‘Yea, I think I must’ve got the time wrong cause I thought I was just fashionably late, not actually late. You look amazing.’ Bette tried to act as casual as possible hoping not to sound as ridiculous as she felt. Tina broke her eye contact and chuckled.
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(31 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.