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‘Bette, this is Eric.’ She said, putting her hand on the elbow of the tall man stood next to her. She held Bette’s eye contact and she could feel Tina’s stare as she smiled at him.
‘Hi there’ She shook his hand. ‘I’ve heard a lot about you. Don’t worry, I shall not embarrass you.’ She said, looking first from him and then back to Tina.
‘Yea, well you know what Alice is like, an eternal gossip.’ Tina laughed not breaking the eye contact she was sharing with Bette.
Nervous laughter filtered all around and Bette decided to try and get out of there.
‘So, umm, I’m just going to grab another drink and try and keep the birthday girl liquidated. Speaking of whom, have you seen Alice recently? Can I get you two anything?’ She gestured with her empty glass.
‘No thanks, I’m fine. I’ll keep a look out for Alice. Oh and I saw you with the barmaid, she seems interested, no wonder you want another drink.’ She smiled and held Bette’s gaze, her eyes were so intense that she could get lost in the deep brown pools. There was something else behind them though this time, she looked hurt. Bette felt a jolt and her stomach twisted again. She became aware of her temperature rising and that Eric was right there so broke the contact and smiled, blushing.
‘Ha, yea, well, I think she’s straight. Just my luck.’ Bette laughed and met her eyes again. What was happening to her, Bette Porter doesn’t normally blush at a girl staring at her.
‘Really, it’s that obvious whether you’re gay or straight?’ Tina’s eyebrow raised and she smirked at Bette, the previous sadness gone and replaced by something she didn’t recognise.
‘Well, I mean… it seems to be the fashion nowadays, straight until.. well until they’re not, although everyone seems concerned with labels and I think that’s a waste of time, much better to have fun finding out.’ Bette smirked back; settling into the Bette she normally was around women, hoping she hadn’t made Tina feel too uncomfortable. ‘But I guess that’s why I always end up in trouble. Boyfriends don’t take it too well.’ Bette winked. She felt Eric shuffle and became very aware that her flirting was probably a bit too obvious.
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Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.