Fan Fiction
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The start
‘Eh hem.’ Bette coughed slightly trying to assess if Tina was ok ‘You going to breathe?’ she asked, a slight smirk crossing her lips. Tina’s eyes shot open and met Bette’s. She opened her mouth but no words came out. Bette became aware of all the people around them, they were being asked to move if they weren’t ordering anything. Tina grabbed Bette’s hand and pulled her away from the bar and through a door marked private.
They had walked into another section of the pub that had been cordoned off. It was empty and the door was doing a pretty good job at insulating the sound from the other room.
‘You ok?’ Bette asked, dropping Tina’s hand which fell to her side. ‘Listen, I’m sorry if I overstepped the mark, I.. uh.. was just having fun. You know us lesbians, always coming onto their straight friends, it’s laughable really…’ She trailed off, Tina’s silence scaring her.
‘Bette’ Bette tried to ignore the shivers making her heart pound at the sound of Tina saying her name.
‘No, no, honestly, I was just joking, I’m sorry I should have picked my timing better, it was silly. I just have had too much to drink and I…’ Bette couldn’t finish her sentence as Tina’s lips pressed against hers. She shrugged her bag off her shoulder and cupped Tina’s head with one hand, the other on her side. She pulled her close and made the kiss deeper. Bette felt Tina moan into her as her tongue stroked at her lips. She could hear her own gasp as she pushed her tongue against Tina’s, revelling in the sensations the intensity of the kiss was causing. Bette felt Tina’s hands in her brown curls and a gentle pressure on the back of her head pulling her into Tina.
‘What are we doing?’ Bette whispered into her lips. She briefly opened her eyes to find Tina’s closed.
‘You’re kissing me’ she replied, their lips not parting. She moaned as Bette closed her eyes again and pushed Tina back against the wall. She could feel Tina’s body against hers, their breasts touching. She felt Tina’s hips move against hers and both moaned at the sensation.
‘Oh, god, you feel amazing’ Tina’s breath was warm and sweet. Her hands slid down to Bette’s shoulders as she carried on kissing her. Bette broke the kiss and moved her lips to Tina’s neck, to that part of her neck she had fantasised about for months. She loved the sounds emanating from the blonde writhing in her arms, they spurred her on. Bette’s tongue touched Tina’s skin again which tasted even better without the salt.
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(31 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.